Let's say, draw me this character But no doodles. Show all the amazing skills you have learned, as you claim. Urban background. Make her standing in the middle of the street, with a cell phone. Make it so called "anime style". Name the price. I'll pay. Everyone's witness ^^
I'm sorry but I can not comment on how to help you improve . After viewing you're page I noticed you used the comment Lewd. And all you're content seems very childish. Rather my suggestion is to reframe from such content. And using any fetishism terms that suggest anything other then innocence. And speaking to a physiologist about what you are going thru. Knowing a bit about physiology myself I would like to adress this.
You want to be innocent. But to be such mean not to lewd the lolis or any content that is deemed under aged.
You have a sexual affiliation with diapers. This is more a muture thing and these may cross over becusle of your conflicted feelings.
I think it's wise to seperate sexual feelings from the innocent thing's. And have clearity. I think mixing those leads someone who likes age regression and or diaper fetishes down a very bad road. So you need to understand the severity of that. It's possible you misunderstand the term lewd. But if it says lewd and involves an age regressed Charater, then that is not normal. And you should seek help and reframe immediately. Again this is a tough thing to write on and stress but I am both concerned about the community you seem to want to appeal to and about you're own wellbeing as a human. I'm not qualified officially to adress this. So i think the reest of deviant art should be willing. I apologize that I can't critique you're work at this time
Grab a sketch book and doodle around. Really i think just doing that, drawing form imagination and emulating someone you like will help alot. Some of the colors can be less finished to me in the designs. Bit the top one really show cases you're ability I believe. And i love it . I enjoy these backgrounds you do with the charaters . I like shadow and small details will go a long way. Really amazing. Keep it up and goodjob^^
I really like the top one most. But the bottom one shows more skill.
I think you had beetercskill with the bottom on and should do more like that but witg pictures like the top one. You can see a few differences.
Don't cheap it on the shadows. I think you can habe alot more depth and for exampleccomplmentary color palets at work. Or just using one color in some cases (optional)
The ear on the bottom one seem a little low to me but still acceptable. My personal thought is to move it up some. I think the eye direction is good but off slightly. It's as if the eye is appealing to the viewer more then it should as far as how it was drawn. The pupil however is fine. I think fixing that will help take it farther. It's an odd angle so rrally get into attempting to find photo references. Overall good work. If love to see more. I really like the nose and design. I'm not not sure about those few elements . Thays why I suggest taking more refrences just to be sure you hit all you're guidelines. I think some extra time for some nice colorful or solid backgrounds will showcase you're work more. I love the top pictures theme. I'm excited to see more
I really like the Astethics you are doing the hair thing is really Unique.
I think you should do more of that. What it comes down to with you is grabbing a sketchbook and really playing with diffrent styles. And asking others "does this appeal?" You should work on devolping you're eye more. And to do that is to draw multiple styles and just have fun with it (: I see what you are going for with the first picture. It's well done. Not my personal taste but it's very interesting reguardless for neat fan art.
As for the second. I love it alot. I see alot of choices you made that really showcase you better there. Overall goodjob and well done. I hope you pull out soke sketchbooks and will attmept diffrent styles. Eith that hair effect etc you do. You may end up finding one you like more. Or a way to complement the current better. It may come down to small choices loke the lips on the top one. I think small lips woild have made that look a bit better. Sometimes it's fun to play with a charaters flaws and likeable parts.
All that comes in expementing more. Thank you for sharing. I really want to see more like the bottom. But let me say I do like the eyes on the top. It's another really interesting choice. I think you should incorperate some backgrounds.
I'm exitied to see this all reach a greater level for you becusle i think you have something very special and cool going on with it. So by no means should you stop. Keep at It!
Try doing some fan art and draw side by side to the offical art and just practice that and drawing form life. Remember shapes are building blocks . Take you're time. And there are alot of great online tutorials worth checking out. I think just studying more will help greatly. Ps- the titans are coming!!
I love that shadow placement. May habe made it so little darker but goodjob. I think the pose work can be alot better. I suggest real life animal study's. Google them and draw a ton in a sketch book. Don't be afraid to mess them up and draw onto them you're ideas as good practice. Don't trace and just keep practicing that. I alsp think you should take a look at slugbox art. And emulate things you see slugbox do.
The ground and clouds can be better for that is study some realism and nature scenes. It can be really fun. And lastly practice drawing from imagion and male sure to get some solid feedback. I really like you're color choices here. Keep it up!! Good work indeed
I'm guessing you are wanting to use some photo munipulation here. Really neat idea. Most people are scared to. With the style and draw itself this is a tough call. But I think you should consider just more practice, check out Mark crilly. For now stay away from photo munipulation tools. Most pros run from those becusle alot of new artists love to use burn tool for example. It it's less controlled. I think you know what you want but dont know how to make it happen. So what I suggest is finding art you like and emulating it and just practice. Don't be afraid to ask questions. I'll suggest tbis to you as well. I did for another artist. To check out slugbox art. There are other artists too like that who are good to emulate . Ps I forgot to say slugbox does muture content so just a heads up.
I'm not sure if the train is twisting but that confuses me. I really love the front part .I have no real complaints and the curve may be a good thing. I just would loke to see this finished ( with a background. Please tell me also if that's the train turning. I like this alot.)
I really would love to see architecture and somecscenery and greens in that maby even a lake or river. I love it. My little nephew loves trains and I'm sure hercwpild freak out just seeing this wonderfully stunning peice. I definately want to see more put of you and am exitied about it. I think you should if you haven't consder making a tutorial on how to draw these things. Personally I'd be very interested in reading and viewing that myself. Great job and its absolutely lovely
Did you invent us currency? Okay okay onto my thoughts.
Really neat i think a give a hint there of what I like about it thay neck angle can defiantly use some work. So I'd study up on anatomy and drawing from life more. And study money. Honestly I think it suits you. And checking out renaissance art ( pretty sure I word butchered that)
Anyway I love the head and face design and the body. The only thing holding you back is the neck.the distance bothers me a bitm remember you want things to look as natural as possible.
A little thing I do is cover up parts of the draw and check it in segments then as a whole . I'll walk away. Come back check again or ask others for feedback. Goodjob and I think you are quite skilled. I'd love to see these in color monochromatic. Maby using pens and ink it in color. The hair can be a bit more fluid in the lines overall goodjob and thank you for sharing it. You are lined up really well on the clothes and face. Keep it up
Really neat. This one isn't something I think im capable of addressing. I like the eye trickery. I know you can check out some scientific study's into those topics. That will help. I also think just doing more with it will help. These are just suggestions becusle i really can't make a call on this one.
I think the animals can use a bit of coloring work. However you make up for it with these stunning backgrounds and scenery shots. Those are really gorgeous and well done. I think usong more shadow can do some good. Lile on the temple . I think it would make it pop more. I still love it as is. Really wonderful works. The animals also look good. I think they need a bit more depth in the coloring and that is all. You are well on you're way (: goodjob