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Need feedback at my art

:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey everyone, i would really appreciate if you could take some time and look at my art!
Please don't say nice,cool and cute i'll appreciate if you write full comments or critique my art ^^
My latest artworks are the two newest, the others are old aka 2017
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Siegeharth Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't see anything wrong with your art ._.
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
people say i gotta work at anatomy and now i hear my coloring is not so well yay
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HeroineAdventures Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It lacks resolution and the colouring is not so well. You'd probably make good digital art as I think the outlines are decent.
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey thank you for your opinion. But i think i am good at coloring i just do sketches lately :) I have been doing digital art a lot at 2015-16 i might get back to it but i am not sure
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not anime for crise's sake it's cartoon.
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
What?
There are a lot of art styles that are not anime related
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay i won't i just thought you meant i draw anime ^^;
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DikaWolf Featured By Owner Edited Apr 17, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Your artwork is not my cup of tea. I can tell you how to improve (since you asked), and make it cleaner (look into using a vector graphics program). If you want to stick to traditional, then my best advise is to learn to draw realistic anatomy before you enhance with a cartoon style, then learn about dynamic movement only after that. It'll only help you're artwork in the future. It took me awhile to learn as much as I have, even went to art college (and got a degree in digital graphics) and took traditional art classes outside of school, and even after that I am still learning.
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the tips. I hope my art will be your cup of tea soon i guess?

Yeah you can't learn something, a subject a language improves every day that way you can never really learn it :/
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DikaWolf Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Start with the basics of anatomy, lighting, and layout balance, and they will be the foundation of your art no matter what your style is/will be.
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Okie thanks
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Enn00 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They look nice,cool and cute :3 btw you seem to have a good hand if you want to improve just practice your anatomy, I know is boring but it works.
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Will do thanks for telling me!
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:icondj95code-hope:
DJ95code-hope Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
done
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
not faves, comments.
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:icondj95code-hope:
DJ95code-hope Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no cares, I like them and I have also enjoyed your art
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
i faved nice pokemon art
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
um ok i'll fav back.
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Shesvii Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Post your art on the official art critique threads :D there you can get some helpful tips.
For traditional, crafts etc: forum.deviantart.com/art/gener…
For digital: forum.deviantart.com/art/digit…

And also FAQ #511: How do I post thumbnails of my art on the Chat Network or Forums?
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks, but as you can see someone already wrote a comment about that.

and you could of given me feedback instead of writing this but i'll try it out 
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:iconshesvii:
Shesvii Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
That sounds a bit rude and demanding but ok, I'm giving you feedback.
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
i am not trying to be rude but like you could look that people told me that i should put it at another folder :/

I still appreciate that you wanted to help me ^^
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Shesvii Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
No worries, it may be just the vibe your comment gave me.

I hope my comment helps you a bit! I just saw it got missplaced, so I'm writing it again. I hate all these bugs :stare:
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry then :>

Awe x( Btw do you want me to give you feedback at your art too?
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StardustTrooper Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Definitely post in the Thumbshare and Art forums. ProjectComment would be a lot of help too.
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Did but nothing happen.
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StardustTrooper Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Did you join the Discord too? 
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
i don't have discord?
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StardustTrooper Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2018  Student Digital Artist
The community's way more active on there! I'd recommend if you want to get some networks going. 
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
okie! Will see thanks!
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:iconstardusttrooper:
StardustTrooper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Np, hope something works out for you. :nod: 
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May-May-Meow Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconprojectcomment:
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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PlantFeathers Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist
You should go and post a comment for comment thread over in the thumbshare forum, it's a great way to get feedback and critiques, but you need to be prepared to give feedback in return.
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
I give feedback but no one gives back :/
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:iconplantfeathers:
PlantFeathers Featured By Owner Edited Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist
Make some rules for your comment for comment thread, and skip over those that post their work but don't leave any feedback.

These are the rules I post in mine whenever I start a comment for comment thread to give you an idea of what you can do:
- One thumb per person, more than one will be skipped over

- No mature content

- No literature. As much as I like reading, I don't currently have the time to read nor the knowledge to leave a proper comment on your writing

- Leave a comment on my work if you want feedback on yours. If you're not prepared to give feedback, you won't get any.

- Spread the love and leave some feedback on the art of the poster above you, comments are ridiculously hard to come by these days
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BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay thanks! I'll post these rules and credit you for them :>
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:iconplantfeathers:
PlantFeathers Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist
No problem! Don't worry about crediting me, they're just generic rules anyone can use :)
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh okay xD
Can you please check my newest devitations? I'll give feedback to you if you do too! :D
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:iconplantfeathers:
PlantFeathers Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist
Sure! Is there any specific piece you'd like a comment on?
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:iconbellemarso:
BelleMarso Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
hi please read the description by BelleMarso   Happy late birthday, Aloe! by BelleMarso  
these two please
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