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Serching italian beta reader

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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2019
I made a book that I would like to have published by a publisher, but I should review it before sending it. This is why I am looking for Beta Readers to help me see what is good and what is not. Is there anyone here who can help me? And since I am italian, the beta reader must talk italian. 
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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DSegno92 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
E' molto lungo?
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019
Beh, in totale ho scritto 215 pagine su microsft world. Ed ogni volta che finivo un capitolo saltavo alla pagina successiva. Ed ho scritto prologo, epilogo, e 38 capitoli.
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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CuteCArtsy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Grande! non vedo l'ora di vederlo! La la la la 
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:iconlpallad:
lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
Come te lo mando?
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CuteCArtsy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
La casella di commento sotto il mio profilo :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconlpallad:
lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
Preferirei dartelo in maniera più privata piuttosto che pubblica. 
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CuteCArtsy Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Nasconderò il commento dopo
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019
Avvertimi quando sei disponibile che te lo mando subito così lo nascondi immediatamente. 
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CuteCArtsy Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Adesso
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019
Non c'è un altro modo in cui posso mandarti le cose? Spyro mi ha detto che è meglio che non ti invio nulla tramite commento. 
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DamaXion Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Artist
Grazie per l'offerta ma non ho proprio tempo in questo periodo ^^" ho già troppi libri da recuperare
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
capisco. 
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: 
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toppa23 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
purtroppo non so come aiutarti , io non mi intendo così bene di editoria , e sinceramente non so neanche cosa sia un " BETA " . Per come la vedo io più lingue parli meglio è !

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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
Un beta reader è qualcuno che legge un romanzo prima che venga pubblicato. Così può dare aiuto e consigli allo scrittore e dire la sua opinione a riguardo. 
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toppa23 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
grazie mille per la delucidazione , molto gentile .
Vedi , sei stato più utile tu a me che io a te ;)
Spero tu possa trovare qualcuno per aiutarti .
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:iconlpallad:
lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
Grazie. ;)
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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eleonoraisabelle Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ciao! Scusa, ma non posso esserti d'aiuto.. :)
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019
ok capisco. 
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:happybounce: 
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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phoenixleo Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
Hello lpallad ,

We appreciate when Deviants make use of our forums but it appears that you may have started your discussion in the wrong area. We try to keep things loosely organized by types of discussions and it appears that your thread fits in better in the Projects area so I’m going to move it over there so that it may receive more attention.

We’ve made a few posts such as our helpful guidelines for this forum which you might find useful for your future forum postings. Thank you for your understanding!
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
ok
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hellenys Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Purtroppo non posso proprio aiutarti, mi spiace.
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Lightyear90 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
ciao! Certo che ti posso aiutare :) Scrivimi pure su come vuoi procedere e di cosa hai bisogno!
Roberta
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:iconlpallad:
lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
Ah, come ti mando il tutto, e te lo mando tutto in una volta o un po' per volta?
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
Beh, ammetto che vorrei che tu leggessi quello che ho scritto, per collaudarlo. In questo modo si può vedere cosa funziona e cosa no, cosa dovrei cambiare e cosa no, per capire cosa è inutile e cosa no e quindi tagliare quello che non serve a niente. Per vedere se i personaggi vanno bene oppure no. Se hanno bisogno di maggiore approfondimento oppure no. Per capire cosa ho sbagliato e cosa ho fatto bene.
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Lightyear90 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
ok, lavoro anche in questo campo quindi penso di poterti aiutare. Quello che hai scritto è in italiano?
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
Ovvio. Avrei scritto anche questo topic in italiano, ma era contro le regole. ;)
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Lightyear90 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
Come preferisci, forse meglio un po' per volta! 
Come vuoi mandarlo? Vuoi il mio indirizzo mail?
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2019
Certo.
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hiram67 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Non sono disponibile, scusami e grazie per avermelo chiesto
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
Peccato. 
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Skull-the-Kid Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
I'm not avaiable, sorry and thanks for asking.
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2019
ok
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fedor766 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2019
mama mia ! ! !
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ItalianUtent Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Di cosa si tratta esattamente? Sono un po' confuso xD
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lpallad Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2019
Urban Fantasy. 
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MajorasMasks Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2019  Professional Artisan Crafter
Hi, I just sent you a note.  :)
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spyrothedragon20087 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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hey guys the mod closed the other forum post so this is the new one!!!
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MajorasMasks Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2019  Professional Artisan Crafter
Replied, thanks for the heads up!
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