I understand your point, actually I never thought of it that way. I like to think that a concept painting can also be like a sudden photo and anything can happen, but you are definitely right, it will look more dynamic if everything focuses on one major subject, and I don't really have a major subject for this. So it is kind of a "random cityscape" with "meaningless focus point"

Your work here are great! Thanks for sharing!

Ha! I sense a lot of similarity between your first cityscape here and mine. Different, but similar in theme.

Great feedback! Thank you! Once again the colors are pointed out to me. I think I was too afraid to oversaturate the colors which would cause a loss of brightness to the scene. I want that sky light to really feel powerful. But you are right, I can still have that effect while using strong colors if done correctly, and your images here show that perfectly!

Wow! Your work is professional! End of statement. I am still timid with such technical detail, to be honest, I know I can do it, but my mind goes blank on how or where to make the "cool techie stuff" As you can see in my images above, I started with a bunch of shapes to fill the scene, and then just tried to fill in the details with line-work. Your ships and hangar here are awesome though, such well thought dynamics to the shape and design of everything.

I am working on some creative methods to overcome that "simple-ness" with tech stuff these days.

Camera angle, yes, I totally agree. This is obviously a simple one point perspective, but it is meant to be my last one point perspective for a long time, I do it because it is easier, and I do it too much. Here on out I am going with two point perspective "at least".

I will study your work more, thanks for sharing!

Great points, thanks! I definitely need to put more emphasis on color choice, it is exactly what I am struggling with. That link "how are eyes are fools" is awesome, I ed it and will be reviewing it frequently.

Everything seems to have the same surface, right again. I think this could be called a matter of "texture". I basically just assumed that everything is the same metal type of surface which made it a bit boring and unrealistic.

Well, I went through 3 stages with this so far, maybe after a break there is time for one more where I play with colors a bit more and focus on the different texture of things.

Thanks for taking the time to write a detailed, constructive feedback!

Nice Sci-Fi work!

Thanks! That's a really good point about the colors. I am learning about that recently because previously I focused more on comic style art, so the colors would be separate from values (kinda), and balanced out by the strong black line-work. But since I started painting I realized that colors have value too and so it is hard to get the right amount of color without making everything too "dark in value". But I'm glad you said that, and I agree, probably needs more color value, not everything has to be bright.

I certainly hope to have time and space for some traditional work again soon, been too busy and travelling recently.

Thanks for sharing, this drawing is awesome, I was wondering how you got such perfect circles for the bubbles and they all seem to have such perfect shade lines too! Really popping off the page. Awesome line-work.