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Yes... it's poetry - BUT it's less than 25 lines and it's looking for your honest thoughts and critique. Tell me anything... desperately want feedback. Yes... I'm desperate
Walls My DefenderCraving a release
from the storm inside.
New ways needed.
I need a guide.
Wanting to express and let emotions seep out
I find myself clueless at where to start.
No words to express, no ears to hear.
No heart to care; no patient mind or soul so kind.
I want to feel affection, not rejection.
I crave connection, not deception.
Independence has been my protector,
walls my defender.
Hiding all torment inside
this cannot go on.
But, this is what I know.
I’m unfamiliar with how to show.
Help me reduce the walls
so I can see and I’m positive
you’ll learn something from me.
Why am I this way today?
It goes much deeper than what I say.