Comment Exchange - 2 Comments For 2 Comments
Here are the rules:
2. I will have a look through your gallery and pick only 2 works and comment on them. You may get favourites too!
Have fun!
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The website kept glitching after I tried sending you the images, so I'll just leave the links.
Commented on both of these~ Read some of your other poetry and really like it as well.
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And I don't honestly care which one of my works you comment on. Whatever ones you like the best I suppose. (:
Commented on both of these~ Read some of your other poetry and really like it as well.
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And I don't honestly care which one of my works you comment on. Whatever ones you like the best I suppose. (:
Commented these two
May I have a comment in these two? 
Thanks!
And I've commented on the pictures you've suggested too
And I've commented on the pictures you've suggested too
I hope you liked them 
I did 
Awesome 
I commented on 
Clumsy FootingI’m no dancing queen,and
I have no rhythm at all,
Frequently tripping.
Clear the dance floor pronto or
I’ll tackle you down with me.
Realms Of Creative InfluenceWith a turn of the
First page I find myself dragged
Into a new world.
Characters begin to live,
Instruments of destiny.
Still looking for some more people!
Anymore takers?
I commented on these two:
And if you don't mind, I'd like you to comment on these:
I've been thinking about changing the second one as I wasn't all happy with it, and I'm not sure if the first one's title is suitable for the lyrical content shown.
Vacant MindHe’s quite not all there;
The light bulb remains unused
After two decades.
His favourite pastime consists
Of burning buildings and towns.
Furry Hitch HikerCruising along the
Clear freeway, hitting forty,
Freedom’s my compass.
What caused me to stop and stare
Is a hitchhiking black bear.
And if you don't mind, I'd like you to comment on these:
Storm Of WordsThere are times where we have to let out,
what we truly think of anything.
Whatever circumstance steps in our way,
there's no point sitting there, doing nothing.
There are times where we have to release,
what we really think of everything,
that spoils our day~~
Whatever circumstance steps in our way,
there's no point twiddling thumbs, let's do something,
about it~~
If something goes bad within our lives,
is there use in keeping it all in?
Whether it's a soul without a mind,
we should condemn it for all its sins.
And if we all demand change for our world,
someone is expected to hear us.
But if you ignore all our wishes,
we will shout bitter words if we must.
Let us express A‒N‒G‒E‒R,
We will say it, we will shout it out loud,
Don't like it, you can walk away.
Let us express A‒N‒G‒E‒R,
And with some H‒A‒T‒R‒E‒D,
With all emotion and all our power,
We will say it and we'll shout it out loud,
Don't like it, you k
Reptile MenLurking unknown,
What could they be?
Are they humans?
Or are they monsters?
The ground's trembling,
Because they're here.
They might hear you,
They might sense you.
(You better run)
Chances are small,
Of your survival.
Don't turn your back,
You could be next.
(You better run)
The reptile men,
Dominate the ground.
Vicious reptile men,
They know your sounds.
The reptile men,
Dominate the ground.
Vicious reptile men,
They are all around.
You better run,
Or they'll find you.
Ruthless bodies,
Empty black eyes.
They're not humans.
They are our nightmares.
Noble killings,
That is their game.
Fear escalates high,
If they're near you.
(There's no time to run)
Impaled by screams,
Dismembered by wrath.
A river of blood,
Their achievement.
(There's no time to run)
The reptile men,
Dominate the ground.
Vicious reptile men,
They know your sounds.
The reptile men,
Dominate the ground.
Vicious reptile men,
They are all around.
You better run,
Or they'll kill you.
The reptile men,
In your area~~
Viciou
I've been thinking about changing the second one as I wasn't all happy with it, and I'm not sure if the first one's title is suitable for the lyrical content shown.
Thanks!
I've commented on the work you suggested.
I've commented on the work you suggested.
Anymore takers?
I commented on these.
You can pick whatever other one you want, but I would really like a comment on this
Why Not Me?It should have been me,
I can see it in your eyes; she
Doesn’t know of us.
You’ve always pictured me as
Your bride, I hope you wise up.
Vacant MindHe’s quite not all there;
The light bulb remains unused
After two decades.
His favourite pastime consists
Of burning buildings and towns.
You can pick whatever other one you want, but I would really like a comment on this
Thank you!
I've commented on two of yours:
I've commented on two of yours:
Thanks! :3
I've commented on these two of yours:
I've commented on these two of yours: