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MONTARO: PrefacePreface:
    No one in Vita will ever forget that day. In fact, nobody in the entire universe will forget that day. The day that the dark plume engulfed the universe. From the dark plume emerged a giant metal ship, its’ sharp nose pierced through the atmosphere. Inhabitants had but a day to evacuate their planet, for a crash landing was imminent. The ship crashed through Korbin and Eris, it struck the core of Antares, it dispersed the gaseous planet of Kayso, its' scorching engines incinerated the hydro planet of Ederra, and finally it crash landed onto the immense planet of Vita. The force shattered the entire universe. Pieces of plan

_{(more chapters linked in this deviation)}

404 EXIT NOT FOUND   [Fire escape --
breaking out of this mental hospital, plan #5
my friend and i shall win this time.]

Light a match, light a crack
     until it looks
        like a detached light
  flickering on and off.

[The sound don't mind it
(alarms sing along with us)
The ground can't find this
(flames dance on the ceiling)
Shoot it all around these blind eyes]

Light a match, let the fire burn.
   i run out of time,       
     i can't rewind
this world that's turning.

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Empty FriendsEmpty friends are trying to tear off my face
Thought black cords were trying to phone my place
Take me away from your time, they said 
Ringing voices that are telling me I'm dead
Empty friends will dream until I sleep

I told you not to push me 
I told you not to save me
But now I'm on a bullet train 
(I'm going down)
I told you not to push me
I told you not to save me
But now I'm on a bullet train
And I'm going down

Empty friends are furious as the sea
Made rivers undertake my eyes in three (two one..)
I've met you beneath the burning skies
Empty friends are making me swim and defy
Raging sails cut by water so

Stay Tuned Scene 1: late night news.

look at all the people,
until you draw a blank to the
outline of their face.

(stay tuned -
there's more
that'll make you immune
to the sores bored in
you.)

a familiar feature
fumbles on the screen
preaching hate through eyes.

- it's a picture of what
 once was living,
 but never human.

(it's all that's left of me -
a photograph,
for all you fuckers to see.)

Scene 2: commercial break.

joke your way out of
what is aching you.

live while you sleep
if that helps you
stay awake.

but come close,
you can't shut
out the punch
from your punchline.

Scene 3: reality.

I faked the good guy act,
got m