only my second painting. i just turned 20 a month ago.
your drawing is pretty decent, especially for only one hour. who knows what it could have been if you put in two or three hours of work. good start, you have a handle on shading and i like your aesthetic.
2. How far along is this piece? That will influence what I may say suggest about it. As of right now the light source is a bit unclear... but you may not have even begun to think about that yet, so I hold my silence!
3. I don't see how this has anything to do with it.