I would really appreciate feedback (on the actual deviation please, not on the forum post) on my newest piece below. I always return the favour by looking through your gallery and commenting on one, if not more, of your pieces

Moonbeam EpiphaniesYou sit on the windowsill of a stranger
who breathes in an unfamiliar rhythm
that doesn't sync up with anything at all.
You're tuned into everything off-beat;
the wrong radio frequency,
but a broken dial.

You wish you could be walking outside,
the place where you would wish you were sitting right here.
Because restlessness, ironically,
is attached to you in one steady place,
but you can't figure out where.
Like a phantom itch,
impossible to satisfy.

Wanderlust, minus the desire;
just because
you don't know what the hell else to do.
If you're still,
it all settles in;
everything you can't face
will prove that it's here to stay.
So you run,

done
watch

watched

This is a sci-fi short film in animation!

Done. I'm watching you.

suree

watched you.

I'm going to watch you... and fave a few of yours, because my dear you've got some insane talent o__0

Just gave you a watch

Just watched you man. Nice work.

Sure!

Watched

of course!

That sounds like a plan.