Share your best writing!
I haven't seen many posts here dedicated to literature deviations, so I guess I'll make one. Here's a place to share the writing deviations that you're most proud of, be they poetry, chapters of novels, fan fics, or any other written work you can think of.
I'll start this party off by posting a few of my favorite writing pieces:
Now it's your turn! Post away! I'll try to favorite and comment on as many as possible.
I'll start this party off by posting a few of my favorite writing pieces:
The Mouse- Chapter OneChapter One, Caroline Thomas The war came softly. To us, the cushioned citizens of what was once the United States, the ordeal was a tiresome combat of ideologies, a debate slightly intensified by the rare bloodshed. Most people only cared when a parade rolled by in the name of patriotism. Occasionally the local news stations would fill their empty airtime with a brief mention of scattered casualties in obscure countries while politicians would rile up voters with talk of terror and peace. Most often, however, no one remembered that we were at war. After all, life was calling. There were responsibilities, desires, and struggles which took priority, and some rightly so. Families were blossoming and careers were developing. The country was emerging from its worst economic crisis since the Great Depression, and all anyone wanted to do was enjoy the moment. I paid some attention though most of what struck me felt surreal like an out of sequence dr
Our BoyOur boy wanted to fight, For freedom. Our boy heard a story once, About a soldier who came home, And didn't remember the fight. Then one morning the soldier woke, Shot twelve kids and, himself. Our boy is fighting, For freedom. And he's just fine. He has a boy face, Boy blue eyes, Boy dark hair in tufts. A boy. No one hurts a boy. But himself. Our boy hears the Ch--ch--chopper blades every day, Ch--ch--chopper blades, ch--children rot. Hot blood. There are buzz--zz--zzing flies, In his mind. And he drinks at night. They never said how clear desert mornings are, In the capital of nowhere where his, Where his, where his, where his thoughts echo. And our boy's day is like every other. Echoing thoughts, Rotting blood, Hangover. Tasteless something, Slides down a choked throat. And our boy drifts Through marching In line To the beat Of the d--d--drum. And he drifts Through the day He is blind To the sun. Our boy gets to patrol. Four horsemen in a humvee, Five is he counts himself, Tro
Mr. Dragon and the Particle AcceleratorMr. Dragon reigns supreme in Silence. He donates crocodile smiles in exchange for Empty minds. He says it's best to live among ashes Instead of risking your neck chasing insatiable Mornings. He gives a speech about humility. And we trade in our eyes for buttons. It all makes sense if you don't judge And instead gush as college-ruled wings surf the applause. A disturbance in the frequency. Nay, worse: Words. A little voice threads through the cheers and asks Mr. Dragon to prove his prowess In a duel. "Step forward!" cries the beast, Masking his delight. And forward steps a mouse. A mouse. Lab coat for a cape, Paws twirling goggles fogged, And whiskers twitching 'neath a Benevolent stare. Mr. Dragon laughs and we vomit echoes. But the mouse curls his tail And waits. Four angels bring forth his weapon. And suddenly our buttons see That this is very real indeed. Silence. Teeth go clack. And jaws go snap. And tail goes crack. As Mr. Dragon spouts paper flames. He thrashes, He crashes,
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I don't share my best stuff online.
This is my newest:
And here's another:
This is my newest:
Blooming Freshman year started the same way my first year of middle school did. I was alone in a strange new world, and it was glorious; like escaping a black cave and finding your self on a white, frozen lake. Now all I needed to do was reach the shore without stepping on thin ice. Part of me promised myself I would stand up and face it and kick the universe's metaphysical ass. I wanted to be somebody triumphant, even though I didn't let anybody, not even my parents, know that about myself. It's harder for people to hit you where it hurts when you hide your soft spots. Sometimes you can't hide them. Sometimes, when they're written on your face, all
And here's another:
The Gift The first time I saw Sandra James wear the scarf was at the group interview. She wore it as a bright violet accent to a dark violet designer suit. Sandra looked to be the most sophisticated, professional woman there, and it worried me; I believed she would beat me out of the job. As it ended up, we were both hired in to the customer service department. I would see her wear the same scarf every day since then, and that pretentious purple thing got gaudier by the week.
Because we were hired at the same time, our cubicles were beside each other. Despite this, I spoke to her less often than many of my other coworkers. Most of us would gather a
Take What You NeedTake my hand,
and I'll take yours.
We'll turn off the lights,
and lock all the doors.
Then we'll walk down the stairs,
to lay in the weeds.
Forget what they think,
'cause now we're set free.
We ran to the ocean,
and we ran to the sun.
After the high wore off
and the day was done.
Then we stared out the window
watched the passage of seasons.
Remember how we used each other
for all the right reasons.
So stop my heart,
and lay me down.
Take what you need,
and I'll return to the ground.
Hand in hand
we'll walk through that door.
You'll get what's mine,
and I'll get what's yours.
Like A Loaded GunI've heard that love is like a loaded gun
And someone else has always got their finger on the trigger
You walk a fine line when you start to fall
And just like a hostage under the cover of darkness
You forget your place
You forget the meaning of subtlety
I know that hurting someone
is a strange way to say "I like you"
but it's true
Yes, love is like a loaded gun
If you're not careful, if you let your hand slip . . .
This is something best left to the adults
This is something best left to the thrill-seekers
A little love was too much for me
Yes, love is like a loaded gun
or should I say
it's like a game of Russian Roulette
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Vampire Like MeWhat do you know about vampires like me?
If you knew how people like me are repelled by the warmth of the sun
would it make you want to withdraw your touch?
Do you know what it's like to live a hundred lifetimes
and still never find what you're looking for?
Are you someone who understands forbidden thoughts
the way they've been leading my existence?
If you knew all that, would you still get close?
Because I don't think you could handle the life I've chose
I don't think you could marry the night the way I've done
Yes, I am a vampire
I am never satisfied
And when I die I'll take a thousand others with me
Would you let me take you w
I am not much of a writer. But I'm fairly satisfied with these poems.
I haven't done much writing in awhile, but I'm hoping to get back into it soon. Here's some of my older stuff:
Thanks for reading!
The Touch of Our ToesYour eyes once reflected the image of my face.
Now, I struggle to remember what they looked like.
Nor can I remember the feeling when your hands once grasped my hips.
I cannot remember the taste when I once held the skin of your neck between my teeth.
The smell of your hair, once pressed against my nose, has slipped away through my nostrils.
Your voice, with the soft tones I once understood more than the words that you spoke, has been silenced for a little too long.
I fear you are becoming nothing but a memory that once was.
Sometimes, I wish the strength of my memory could bring you back, if only for a single touch of our toes, if onl
Listen...
then
after listening
mouths drop
words of wisdom make
significant silences
are forever
happy, tight, wrong
filled with feeling
my experiences are
correct, new, different
in the end
lovely
i want to be
standing in front
always
hide hardships
all i do is
listen
first
...
I am a ClockI am a clock
(tick tock)
frozen in motion
(ticktockticktock)
I am constant
never changing
mechanically moving from
one (tick) to two
Thanks for reading!
Not my favorite piece, but I don't have many complete works uploaded to dA to pick from. I still like this one, though.
History of the Potato ChipA Brief History of the Potato Chip
2011. R. Watson
Potato chips were invented by Sir Potatus Chipp in London, England 1593. Potatus was delivering a wagon cart full of potatoes to the queen and listening to snippets of Shakespeare comedies read by his mate. Potatus laughed so hard milk came out his nose. This, of course, startled the horses. All the potatoes fell into the wagon spokes and the friction on the axles generated enough heat to fry the potatoes. Potatus begged the queen to try the "chipps" before ordering his execution. Queen Elizabeth became so delighted at the treat that she knighted Potatus.
Ridges were invented several hundr
eh..... [link] i would say would be probably atm my favorite piece.
I am proud of this novel (though the first chapter isn't wonderful).
I am proud of this short story.
And I am proud of this poem.
I am also quite proud of the challenge I am undertaking to write a short story a day.
Casting RunesongsA Blurb
Angels and demons have been in a war for thousands of years, waged in the skies above a neutral human kingdom. Few remember what started the war, but it continues through racial hatred and continued wartime atrocities committed by both parties. Demons and angels both seek the favour of the lesser human beings in order to gain a small strategic edge, but time and time again wise kings, or wise advisors have turned them down, maintaining an uneasy equality in their kingdoms. Yethzer is a member of the Demonguard, an order of demons equal to great generals when not protecting their king in battle. One day, on a routine training reconnaissance mission he and his young flock are attacked by a group vastly different from any they have encountered before. They are attacked by a flock of demons supported by an angel choir, an impossibility due to the strong inherited hatred in every single member of both races. Yethzer alone escapes and takes his story to the humans, sure th
I am proud of this short story.
Somber WonderlandAlice chased the rabbit across the grass. It was a little brown rabbit like all in her area yet she chased it anyway. It darted into a garden bed and she crunched in after it. She didn't even notice the root that curled around her foot and didn't see the stone until it was a mere inch from her nose. She threw her hands forward but it was too late to stop her fall. Her head passed through the stone and she found herself tumbling down a wide rabbit hole. It was very dark, what would happen if I ran into a wall Alice thought. Bright lights appeared above her and slowly fell past, she reached out and caught one and found that it was a small torch. She pointed its beam at the walls of the rabbit hole and was relieved to see they were at a safe distance. The walls were loose dirt, with little tufts of grass growing out of them. As she fell they became smoother and smoother. She realised rather suddenly that the walls had become white plaster, just like the walls in my house<
And I am proud of this poem.
Red DustPainted by the red dust
We shoulder the weight
Scoured by the red winds
We carry the future
Connected to our origins
But never to return
We answer to Earth's people
Yet this planet is our own
Can we carry our own future
And cease being used?
Can we gain our independence
Without fighting a whole world?
Painted by the red dust
We shoulder the weight
Scoured by the red winds
We carry the future
I am also quite proud of the challenge I am undertaking to write a short story a day.
Great work! And thank you for the favorite on my the first chapter of The Mouse. It's a long read, but I'm glad someone liked it. I really appreciate it!