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Comment for Comment! [literature]

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DevilsMatrix Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
One-DayI’ve watched you
From the darkness
I’ve watched
And I have learnt.

You stand
Amongst the spotlights,
You walk under the sun.

Your teeth are white, and
When you flinch,
Your lips, so perfect,
Twitch.

You will have a dog behind you,
A dark hell hound of sorrow

Of tears, of bottled fears,
Of your subtle make-up smears.

Caress upon your paling skin,
The world arest in cruelty’s jest,
Will lay another stone akin,
Alongside to the rest.

We will watch you sink
A diamond once,
A jewel once,
Tinged in red
From dying smiles

I watch you, and
Wait
For this tragic end
I anticipate
Destiny, Fate,
Acursed decree

What I do know sha
ConstellationsThe freckles on your skin,
Spilling constellations,
Of a future long lost.

Those milky eyes,
Sunken, blinded in clouds,
Of a past ever present.

What have you become?

How could you remain?

These battle scars.
A different kind.
No victory to boast,
As the last man stands.

Drop your weapon, soldier,
Peel from your tattoos,
Shrink into the cobwebs,
where you survived.

Sewing your eyes shut,
With rusted mapping pins.
Doing so, cost you your life,
As I turn from the shattered mirror.

FickleLittle stone statue,
Hiding in a lampshade.
Come show us,
Your expensive smile.
A permanent bruise,
Where your eyes touch.

The shallow waters
Of a fickle soul.
Conspicuous,
You attempt to shine.’

I figured I need some more publicity for these peices.
So yeah.
COmment for Comment,
Fav for Fav,
Watch for Watch.
My comments depend on the detail of your own,
and on how much I am interested in your peice ;D
I feel enthusiastic today!
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PonderHope Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
Our Ambivalent EverythingLyrics written by Jonah Asher Feintuck
Music written by Jonah Asher Feintuck and William Maranci

Locust wreck the shine on your solar city
Heave your stillframe black eye dream
Reckless past the apex, eradicate the life vest
Bane for my index, stillborn princess

Tow your grinning deathwish like a gift to the limbless
Neutered by the wolves and the halos of the skeletons
How this wretched miscarriage falls to the earth...
Athena break her wings on her inferno

Locust wreck the shine on your solar city
Heave your stillframe black eye dream
Reckless past the apex, eradicate the life vest
Bane for my index, stillborn princess

Tow you


Undertow By ComputerLyrics written by Jonah Asher Feintuck
Music written by William Maranci

Drown and dismantle with me
Purge me, this vitreous night
This is the repercussion
Lunar tirade black mind

Cyber angel, I'm falling
Desperate for you...
Relocate the compass
Riptide queen, we're decaying...

Here comes the comfort swarm...
Holding a decrepit box, that reads:"Is forever over?"

Taste the acrylic rust
Oh my digital, we're collapsing...
No, you're collapsing.
On a coastline near nowhere.

Anguish would like to see you...
Ignore my facade
This gravity
Is a survival plea of ghosts

Here comes the comfort swarm...
Holding a decrepit box, that reads:"Is foreve


Silhouette JudasLyrics written by Jonah Asher Feintuck
Music written by Jonah Asher Feintuck, Blake Johnson

Intro: Perfect
--------------
Verse: Pain is a Parisian schoolgirl
       And soon you're forgotten like her cigarettes
       Juxtapose the orifice
       Of jet lag and 5,810

       This is my Sasuke moment
       I drip like a mane of gizzards
       Attached to a bullet named syntax
       And I w
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DevilsMatrix Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
will take a look =]
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DevilsMatrix Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
boop
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