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Poetry About Time

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*M-J-Gagne Jan 5, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

If you have some poetry that deals with the subject of time I would love to read it.

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~emirasmussen Jan 6, 2013

I am a ClockI am a clock
              (tick tock)
frozen in motion
                      (ticktockticktock)

I am constant
never changing
mechanically moving from
                      one              (tick)             to two

Thanks for reading!

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*M-J-Gagne Jan 6, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Commented! Thanks for posting

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~DevilsMatrix Jan 6, 2013 Student Writer

We are WalkingWe are walking,
We will travel.
In this life of ours we lead.
A path is set to follow,
Naught else we hope to need.
A beautiful existence,
If such beauty can be spared.
You’ll find pain is inevitable,
For all who once have cared
And in the darkest hour,
When candlelight grows dim,
He who walks despite it,
Shall be freed of all his sin.
In light and blackness equal,
In all the shades of grey.
This life we lead will linger,
The living will walk today.

Sort of related to 'time' as in 'life goes on'

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*M-J-Gagne Jan 6, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Commented! Thanks for sharing

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$namenotrequired Jan 6, 2013 Student Interface Designer

A Darker DawnWhen new sunrise
is not as bright
as yesterday's,
do realise

the Promised Land
was never meant
to beat the Holy
Paradise

You don't have to give feedback but I thought I'd share it if you're interested

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*M-J-Gagne Jan 6, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Critiqued! Thanks for posting.

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