my lastest, i've improved a lot c:

let see what u think ...

(It would be nice if you told me what you like or don't like about this piece - I was so proud of it when I finished it and it got no attention at all so...I feel like maybe I'm not seeing something and fresh eyes would be nice >.>... thanks so much I'm willing to do the same for one of your pieces if you want )

Enjoy!

okiedokie

Here you go

>//<

I'm proud of this one.



Because I managed to express what I wanted.

It's also my newest, but it took me so long to finish it and now I'm happy about it ^_^

Hope you like it!

Still WarriorThe love he had for me appeared to be emotionless.
He spoke my language.

Light hearts, toothy grins, and the feel of comfort are what kept me free.
Like a non-believer with high morals; that man was a sight to see.

My insides were no longer facing defeat,
And for once in my life I could just breathe.

A moment of bliss came,
And when it left my soul followed.

A man that was so prevalent in my antiquated life story,
Would soon lay dead, on the pavement, for more than two centuries.

There were no feelings; the details spoke for themselves.
The respect given was only valid if I put myself last.

It was painful, and it broke me down;