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sylor41's avatar
Whats up guys :wave:, I would like for you to show me your newest work (One thumb only) for me to comment on.

However, I will only comment on it if you comment on mine :).

Here's my latest:

Please only post 1 thumb, if you post more I'll ignore it.

Thank you for you participation :D
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sylor41's avatar
I'm sorry, this thread is closed.
artistmyx's avatar
here are mine
Tobi-chan-Lissesul's avatar
This is my newest one that I've done. ^^ Hope you like it. ^^
mystichuntress's avatar
A lasting impressionTime erases all imprints from memory;
Like footprints in the sand
Everyone leaves a gaping depression
Lasting only a short while before
The wind eventually covers it
Similar to how sand fills an hourglass.
Or waves wash them away
In a manner not unlike
Tears cleansing the eyes.

However, you are the only person I will never forget;
For you have left, not footprints in the sand but,

Footprints in my heart.


Okay, there's too much contrast in the city buildings, so the lighting is kind of harsh in the picture. Since the focus is on The Observer looking down onto the city, it was a good idea to place him on top of the white buildings, so the black of his cape stands out. The top part of him is kind of lost to the landscape below, but I'm assuming that was your intention.
What I don't understand are the black splotches next to him - what are they supposed to be? It gives the impression of a ruined photo, but I'm reluctant to say that it adds "character" or "impact" to the picture, rather it diminishes.
iouquie's avatar
Commented yours.