Critique trades!
Alright, the last time I did this it ended up being a disaster. I got overloaded with messages, and couldn't critique all the artworks people shared with me 
So, I'm going to run this a little differently this time.
I'm going to try something I like to call "critique trades". How it works is;
1) You post up to THREE deviations in the description that you want feedback on, and I will chose ONE to give you feedback on.
2) After you confirm my critique was fair, I will send you one of my deviations to critique.
So in essence, I will give feedback in exchange for feedback. That way, everyone wins!
I will look at all media, and you don't have to have Critique enabled on the image to receive feedback. I will leave a comment in this case (please enable comments so I can do so!).
Without further ado, let's go!
So, I'm going to run this a little differently this time.
I'm going to try something I like to call "critique trades". How it works is;
1) You post up to THREE deviations in the description that you want feedback on, and I will chose ONE to give you feedback on.
2) After you confirm my critique was fair, I will send you one of my deviations to critique.
So in essence, I will give feedback in exchange for feedback. That way, everyone wins!
I will look at all media, and you don't have to have Critique enabled on the image to receive feedback. I will leave a comment in this case (please enable comments so I can do so!).
Without further ado, let's go!
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SubmissionIt's not about getting lost in the news.
It's not about the lives they used.
I could be your savior if I
Can put this world to sleep.
Light the fuse inside my cold judgment.
Burn me down to the wonderful mind,
Here I am.
We're all frogs hopping off the big bus
In a world that keeps rusting.
We sell things, we are in submission.
We sell things, we are in submission.
It's not about the dark 'n alley ways.
It's not about the steamed factory days.
I could be your savior if I
Can please you in a back seat.
Light the fuse inside my tired brain
Burn me down to the wonderful life,
Here I am.
We're all frogs hopping off the big bus
In a world
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I'm game
Done!
I won't make you do one for me in return. My advice wasn't all that helpful.
I won't make you do one for me in return. My advice wasn't all that helpful.
i dont have critique activated but comment is just as effective. i will just say fair or unfair
or something like thatThat's fine, I don't need critique activated to post my feedback
Anyway, critique sent
If you think it's fair, please give me some feedback on one of these;
(unfortunately just these two for now)
Anyway, critique sent
If you think it's fair, please give me some feedback on one of these;
Reminiscent of ChildhoodLazy autumn days;
Crimson leaves falling with grace
Down, down forever.
Rainbow sprinkled bread
Like fairy dust on my tongue,
A delicious treat
A humble teddy,
Waiting expectantly for
Me. I’ll come tonight.
Wet Saturday morn,
A field of sludge and grass
Torn by flailing wood
Now, reminiscing,
I remember childhood joy,
So fresh, so vivid
If only those days
Of innocent play & smiles
Would return once more
For now, however,
I am content in memoirs;
So, I reminisce.
That was an awesome critique thank you.!! Uhm I can only see the one option...
Oh? Maybe my thumbnails are being annoying...do you want me to send links instead?
Yes please that would be awesome
Thank you so much!!
Critique sent
If you're happy my feedback was fair, please give me some feedback on one of these;
(sorry, just these two for the time being)
If you're happy my feedback was fair, please give me some feedback on one of these;
Reminiscent of ChildhoodLazy autumn days;
Crimson leaves falling with grace
Down, down forever.
Rainbow sprinkled bread
Like fairy dust on my tongue,
A delicious treat
A humble teddy,
Waiting expectantly for
Me. I’ll come tonight.
Wet Saturday morn,
A field of sludge and grass
Torn by flailing wood
Now, reminiscing,
I remember childhood joy,
So fresh, so vivid
If only those days
Of innocent play & smiles
Would return once more
For now, however,
I am content in memoirs;
So, I reminisce.
Sorry if I answer just now, I'll go send the critique! ^^
Okay, thank you
I'm done ^^ (Sorry if it took so long 
)
)It's fine, I'll have a proper read when I get my computer up & running in the morning
Thanks for watching
Critique done
If you believe my feedback was fair, please choose one of these to give me some feedback on;
(sorry, I only have two )
If you believe my feedback was fair, please choose one of these to give me some feedback on;
Reminiscent of ChildhoodLazy autumn days;
Crimson leaves falling with grace
Down, down forever.
Rainbow sprinkled bread
Like fairy dust on my tongue,
A delicious treat
A humble teddy,
Waiting expectantly for
Me. I’ll come tonight.
Wet Saturday morn,
A field of sludge and grass
Torn by flailing wood
Now, reminiscing,
I remember childhood joy,
So fresh, so vivid
If only those days
Of innocent play & smiles
Would return once more
For now, however,
I am content in memoirs;
So, I reminisce.
)
only got one atmI'm afraid I really don't know anything about metal crafts 
I do like it, though! It obviously took a lot of time & effort
I do like it, though! It obviously took a lot of time & effort
Critique done
If you believe my feedback was fair, please choose one of these to give me some feedback on;
(sorry, I only have two )
If you believe my feedback was fair, please choose one of these to give me some feedback on;
Reminiscent of ChildhoodLazy autumn days;
Crimson leaves falling with grace
Down, down forever.
Rainbow sprinkled bread
Like fairy dust on my tongue,
A delicious treat
A humble teddy,
Waiting expectantly for
Me. I’ll come tonight.
Wet Saturday morn,
A field of sludge and grass
Torn by flailing wood
Now, reminiscing,
I remember childhood joy,
So fresh, so vivid
If only those days
Of innocent play & smiles
Would return once more
For now, however,
I am content in memoirs;
So, I reminisce.
)