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SubmissionIt's not about getting lost in the news.
It's not about the lives they used.
I could be your savior if I
Can put this world to sleep.
Light the fuse inside my cold judgment.
Burn me down to the wonderful mind,
Here I am.
We're all frogs hopping off the big bus
In a world that keeps rusting.
We sell things, we are in submission.
We sell things, we are in submission.
It's not about the dark 'n alley ways.
It's not about the steamed factory days.
I could be your savior if I
Can please you in a back seat.
Light the fuse inside my tired brain
Burn me down to the wonderful life,
Here I am.
We're all frogs hopping off the big bus
In a world
or something like that
Reminiscent of ChildhoodLazy autumn days;
Crimson leaves falling with grace
Down, down forever.
Rainbow sprinkled bread
Like fairy dust on my tongue,
A delicious treat
A humble teddy,
Waiting expectantly for
Me. I’ll come tonight.
Wet Saturday morn,
A field of sludge and grass
Torn by flailing wood
Now, reminiscing,
I remember childhood joy,
So fresh, so vivid
If only those days
Of innocent play & smiles
Would return once more
For now, however,
I am content in memoirs;
So, I reminisce.
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So, I'm going to run this a little differently this time.
I'm going to try something I like to call "critique trades". How it works is;
1) You post up to THREE deviations in the description that you want feedback on, and I will chose ONE to give you feedback on.
2) After you confirm my critique was fair, I will send you one of my deviations to critique.
So in essence, I will give feedback in exchange for feedback. That way, everyone wins!
I will look at all media, and you don't have to have Critique enabled on the image to receive feedback. I will leave a comment in this case (please enable comments so I can do so!).
Without further ado, let's go!