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December 9, 2012
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Scarlet Lady - want your feedback

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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 9, 2012
Hi guys

Would love your feedback on the artwork of one of our series. Its a superhero series called Scarlet Lady






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:iconplangkye:
~plangkye Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Will the male heroic characters also always be shown in compromising positions?
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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 13, 2012
Not always! Any comments on the artwork itself?
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:iconplangkye:
~plangkye Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That WAS a comment on the artwork.
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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 17, 2012
Hehe.. could you rephrase that less cryptically :)
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:iconsaevuswinds:
~saevusWinds Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
I can give you some insight. Could you look at this for me?
Color of BlueWe come, skin tinted the color of frost,
Color of cold, color of blue.
They shout, carrying words with the wind, preaching,
"People are equal," but people are lost.

Little lies, the size of snowflakes drift,
Landing on hopes, landing on dreams.
Our hearts, with winter's tears touching it, freeze,
Numbing it until the blood turns blue.

For some, the cold beats them down,
Chilling their warmth, chilling their light.
Their blood, turning into blue ice shatters,
Finally cracking under the pressure.

We're told, with wide expecting eyes,
Reach for better, reach for perfection.
Blue blood, polluting our minds with every expec
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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 13, 2012
Not sure what you want me to look at for you?
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:iconsaevuswinds:
~saevusWinds Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
The poem in the comment please.
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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 11, 2012
Hmm, no one keen on giving feedback?
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:icondeshmukh:
~deshmukh Dec 9, 2012
BTW, Premise of the series is......

Los Angeles. The capital of Porn? Not in these times! Still it’s a job for Scarlett Walker who leads a double life as porn star by day and silicon enhanced superheroine by night after a boob job by the ‘Doctor’ gave her a lot more than she had bargained for.
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