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December 4, 2012


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Need some feedback

KillianSeraphim Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
So recently, I've been looking into the Mary Sue syndrome that many characters fall into. This has caused me to reflect on my own characters, causing me to worry. As I am potentially bias in favor of my characters, I would like some outside feedback.

[link] The link is to my gallery, I usually post a sort of character bio with the characters I upload (If more detail is required, let me know). I would like someone to go through my characters and search for any signs of Mary Sue syndrome. Your feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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TheBlackBullets Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Link doesn't work.
KillianSeraphim Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for telling me. New link is in my signature.
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