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November 26, 2012


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Show me three pieces of art! Any art will do!

TheLiarWolfram Nov 26, 2012  Student Filmographer
I'll leave a comment on one of the thumbnails you give me giving compliments and helpful, constructive criticism. I will not say anything hurtful. I.E. no "you suck at drawing," "get a life," "who would want to look at THAT?" comments. I just want to help people improve.

In return, take a look at my gallery and leave a comment on one of my works. There are a few thumbnails below.

Note: All types of work, including photography and literature, are welcome.

SynesthesiaI've seen her like a ghost along the streets, shadowy and strange. When she walks, she seems to dissipate and fade into the cloudy sky, her clothes seeped in the rain. Her long black hair, soaked by the storm, and her warm gray eyes, all evanescent and ethereal in the dormant light, soak up the bitter, silvery light. She walks there on the side of the streets, sun or rain, August drought or November blizzard. I watch her from the window as my fingers stroke the dusty keys of the dying piano I haven't played for nearly a year now, and I love her.
    My weary fingers play this song softly, without confidence. There are no words to speak anym

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Pixturesque Nov 30, 2012   Photographer
Indiron Nov 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Newest one;
ezo Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I make polymer clay jewelry. Its a little different, and I hope you enjoy!

Millefiori necklace
Sunburst pendant
Confetti Earrings
Ray of Sunshine Ring
Ray of Sunshine Drop Earrings
Red crystals
Metallic Pendant
Ice Blue studs
Held Circle Pendant
MLBlue Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I commented on your squirrel pic.

Ranay-L Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LadyFrankenstein1138 Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
plangkye Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist

While I acknowledge I said "lazy colors don't bother critiquing them" on one of those, this of course doesn't apply to critique of any other part of the image if you spot anything else that's off.
TropicalxLondon Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist

My best three :D
TheUnoriginal Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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