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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Post anything of yours, up to five, whether it be literature, photography, or any other art...just post it! I will comment and critique as best as I can.

All I ask in return is to comment on one of my works.
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DimensionSeven Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012

Enjoy! :wave:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Writer
Don't forget to comment on something of mine. :XD:
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sophiaazhou Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012


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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
Finished. Thank you for sharing a variety of your works. :nod:
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sophiaazhou Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
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StealTheSenses Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
Finished. Thanks for sharing. :)
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David-Essex Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
I don't remember you commenting on anything of mine. Mind commenting please?
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deer-o Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student Photographer
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
Finished. Thanks for sharing :)
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Plush-Artist Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Finished.
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gozgaz1 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Finished! :)
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JericaWinters Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
I finished commenting! Please don't forget to comment one of my deviations.
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JericaWinters Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Thanks for so many comments. I'll comment on some of your work tomorrow, when I'll have more time to read.
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
You're very welcome, and okay thanks! (you only have to comment on one btw)
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Finished :)
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KalineReine Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Yay! Thank you. :iconawwwplz:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
You're very welcome!! :D
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DTKinetic Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Commented on a couple of yours...

Here are mine
Poetry/Lyrics:
I Am a TreeI am a deciduous tree…
Growin from my roots individual-ly.
From the stump
Up from the trunk
And out sproutin' branches
Weavin'
Reason for each season
Spring's in.
I blossom,
Shower me in flowers
Because I feel damn awesome.
Squirrels cuddlin' me synonymous to girls lovin' me
No need to get the mud off my knees
Livin off of the puddle Be-
Cause, I got chlorophyll
On the forest hill.
Any inch of growth
Is more than a chore I killed.
Fall's around the corner, and I can still breathe,
But it hurts when all my leaves...leave.
Weather's ranging, colors changing.
Like an abstract painting.
Picture framing
Wet paint to t
Cold Heat(sing)
*Chorus*

I wait for
Breeeeze in the heat,
Then weather
Briiiings in the snow,
How can there
Beeee way to live amidst the,
Coooold heeeaat?

(rap)
Yo,
Temporary, even temperamental
Like some tenants at apartment rentals
Stayin for a couple of months then hit streets
Everything got dirty, time to replace the sheets
And now for better things
No more extremities
Defining my identity
Workin' now at Kennedy
Architectural major turned mapper
Bullied little kid in high school turned rapper
Turn the page into the next chapter
Like a photo album image with a whole different capture
I make things cook but I'm better than

Prose:
Don't Touch AnythingThe wind blew so hard Larry almost thought that he could see it. His body felt like it was swaying to the side. When he looked in front of him, he saw a frosted surface and nothing behind it.
He took his hand, which was on the other side of the surface, and wiped it clean. It was a helmet with a faceshield.
When the surface was clear, he saw the environment.
It was a forest. A twisted brown pathway weaving between all these abnormally tall tree trunks, that rose perhaps a hundred feet at least before the branches and leaves covered the sky like a blanket. Just a little bit of that majestic light peered through.
Everything was quiet. Too
Exocide The Card PreviewI swallowed. I found myself paying attention to Trey's house. I ran and grabbed my binoculars, and saw the dream transcend to reality.
Trey was throwing his dirty clothes all over his room. I could see that his lights were on bright and his blinds were wide open. Then, something papery fell from the ceiling, or at least that's what it looked like. Trey slowly caught it and stared at it. He knew it was the card that Darren gave him after the bike race. He didn't actually read what it had to say. He was staring at it for minutes. I couldn't talk. I dreaded what happened next.
Trey's parents walked into the room.
I dropped the phone.
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Finished.
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DTKinetic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Much appreciated =D
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
No problem!
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MharkNeilCudal Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist

Great gallery you have got :)
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Thanks! I forget, did you leave a comment?
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chiimal Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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Pretty please? <33
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Done. :la:
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chiimal Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love youuu! Thank you so much!!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
Thanks. XD you're very welcome. :D
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Yancis Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012   Writer
Sorry for the late comment, but commented!
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Yancis Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
OkiDoki! :D
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ssensory Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012   Writer
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