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*JericaWinters Nov 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Hi,
I'm looking for opinions on the poses and composition of the rough sketch below. I want to fix any flaws in the rough sketch before I start inking and adding more detail. I'm not crazy about the robot woman in the upper right corner...not sure why.

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~remembermeforawesome Nov 20, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

enhance her face structure a bit, but not too much. Also, her fingers are a bit blunt, make it just a little bit more round.

Glad I could help.

*Kitty-Cat-Angel Nov 20, 2012 Professional Digital Artist

I think the left butt cheek should be left out, it makes the pose look uncomfortable.

~FreedomDrawer Nov 19, 2012 Student Traditional Artist

Something about her right hand, the farthest left seems to big in perspective.
The headband seems a little bit bigger than its head or it doesn't look like there's enough hair.
Something about that back leg looks odd, though it's probably just me.
Hope that helped

~shininginthedarkness Nov 19, 2012

Exaggerate the foreshortened bits more!
MORE!

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