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November 19, 2012
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JericaWinters Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Hi,
I'm looking for opinions on the poses and composition of the rough sketch below. I want to fix any flaws in the rough sketch before I start inking and adding more detail. I'm not crazy about the robot woman in the upper right corner...not sure why.

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remembermeforawesome Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
enhance her face structure a bit, but not too much. Also, her fingers are a bit blunt, make it just a little bit more round. :) Glad I could help.
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Kitty-Cat-Angel Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think the left butt cheek should be left out, it makes the pose look uncomfortable.
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FreedomDrawer Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Something about her right hand, the farthest left seems to big in perspective.
The headband seems a little bit bigger than its head or it doesn't look like there's enough hair.
Something about that back leg looks odd, though it's probably just me.
Hope that helped :)
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Exaggerate the foreshortened bits more!
MORE!
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