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=Luminela Nov 19, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I need to flex those critical thinking muscles. Just give me a thumbnail of what you want me to critique and I'll do it on the deviation page. Or, if you want me to just look at your work as a whole, I can do that as well. I prefer drawings and paintings, but photography and lit are welcome as well. Keep in mind that for photography, my knowledge of technical aspects is limited. Lit will probably take me considerably longer to get through as well.

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Bittersweet SymphonyI hear it in the distance
Beautiful to my ears
Torture to my heart
Heightening my fears
For what lies ahead on this journey
I hear the bittersweet symphony

The soft notes painted in the back of my mind
Bleeding into the crevices of my thoughts
Fogging my vision of the future
Leaving my heart in distraught
Not yet knowing harmony
Just hearing the bittersweet symphony

Feeling the melody reach nearer
With each breath I take
The music creating lyrics on my tongue
Forming emotions I cannot shake
Insecurity, hope, jealousy, love?
Not wanting to be just a fantasy
Still I hear the bittersweet symphony

I turn to you for help
But you do not hear it
You're thousands of miles away
Oblivious to the bittersweet symphony that is haunti

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