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Less Than 5 Comments?

9-Silver-Shadow-2

Deviations with Less Than 5 Comments? Feel free to post them here and I'll comment on them for you by giving some helpful comments/advice.

A few rules first:
- 1 thumb max if you post more than one I will ignore you as you have ignored me
- Any medium except literature (not really into that)

Feel free to watch me as I will watch back.

If I really like your work, I'll possibly give a

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SarahReneeCreations

Thank you!

Ah sorry, I see this is quite an old thread

thanks in advance

The Dracona Society Ch3Fira turned around and looked at a boy her age with eyes just like hers. His hair was black and skin tanned. "Who are you?" Fira asked, narrowing her eyes at the stranger. "My name is Diego, who are you?" "Fira, nice to meet you." Fira said sarcastically. "You aren't from here are you?" Diego asked before Fira had the chance to turn and walk away. "I could show you around." "No thanks..." "Your clothes stick out too much, you need something else to wear. I can bring you to the market," Fira looked at him. He was dressed simply, in a long sleeved, old white shirt and brown pants. He was barefoot too. "Fine, maybe you can buy a pair of shoes too." said Fira. "I have plenty, back on the ship." Diego said, pointing to his left. Off in the distance, there was a harbor. There was a line of sails along the shore, many different ships. Some were anchored in the open water and others were actually floating above everything. "Whoa," "There's more, come on." Diego said, walking away. Fira

SilverPsychopomp

If you have time, you could check out my other posts. And I really do hope you'll like some of them...*crossfingers

Thank you ^_^

CyanideSunflower

TheLovingKind89

Just submitted, so no comments on this one:

(also read description for shitty joke)