I wouldn't mind helping. Critiques are always beneficial for both parties.
I've been traditionally trained and taught high school and at a collegiate level. I'm a Design Manager who knows what looks good and how to make things better, so if you need pointers and references I'm your guy.
i've critiqued a bunch of manga/anime artists before and i always try to be specific about what the problem is and what can solve it! people say my critiques have helped them. and i never critique in a rude way, i'm polite!
i've seen tons and tons of manga art, i've loved it for several years so i've seen SO many styles and artists. i draw it all the time <333 it's my passion <333 so i would be happy to do this!