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~Angelsvoice14:iconAngelsvoice14: May 15, 2008, 4:14:35 PM
Running far, Running fast
Away from the world-
Away from the past

What I would give
To be someone else-
to finally
Be able to live

To break this chains,
That hold me fast
Wishing if only,
dreams could last

If only I could raise my voice
And say what my heart desires
If only I had the courage
To fight the raging fire

A whisper in the silence,
To calm my aching heart
A gentle word,
But something so loudly heard

If only there was a place
To truly be myself
No worries, No regrets
And if only it would last,
maybe someday,
I could forget the past.

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*raspil:iconraspil: May 15, 2008, 8:23:41 PM
from the prose forum FAQ: - Don't post your work for critique or comments. That's what the workshop forum was created for.

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*mdog02:iconmdog02: May 15, 2008, 10:02:39 PM
Try the Lit Workshop: [link]

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~K-Sajid:iconK-Sajid: May 16, 2008, 7:30:20 AM
I thought this would be an interesting thread about tradition and I could finally show off my new found knowledge of it, having just read this T.S. Eliot essay today.

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^lovetodeviate:iconlovetodeviate: May 16, 2008, 11:36:43 PM
Please use the link *mdog02 provided if you would like feedback on your work. And read the forum guidelines before posting.

This shall be locked now.

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