Well, your drawings are good, but the anatomy isn't.
You having to see books of anatomy, and study and practice.
And you're very young, you've to be patient, the time and the practice are neccesary.
Beg for my English, my natural language is Spanish (from Spain)

I can say one thing you have going for you, you push your darks and are not afraid of you pencils. That is a good thing and something that will make it a lot easier for you to continue improving.

Hi, I just had a glance at yourartwork, and I can say I'm inpressed. What I particullary like is that youlike drawing mythology characters, and also the shadows you draw, they're tending to perfection. And by "tending", I mean the following: First you should improve the proportions of the bodys you draw, For example check this out [link] I know your best poses are inspierd by others artwork, but what I think is you should find your own way to draw the human body. For example, check my drawings, and you'll see that most ov the girls have a long neck. I hope you understand what I mean and please stop being dissapointed because I think you have great potential. Just try finding your style, and improving the body structure

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