HI!!

I am writing a comic about a girl who has a weird dream...she wakes up and feels like playing around in the attic and finds a carpet...and it flies..YAYY!! well, i cant go on cus then ill spoil the story...

Well, I'm currently re-making my comic. But it's a sci-fi/greek mythology/action adventure story about 3 guys (all Lynx, which are cat-like animals for those who don't know) and they are sent up to Mount Olympus by the Gods to become Soldiers of the Gods. They go through what seems like a year of training, and their main goal is to defeat Loki, who is trying to completely destroy the universe.

There's a lot to it.

And I started out drawing small comic strips for myself and friends on lined paper, with colored pencils, with Sonic the Hedgehog fan characters.
I think I've improved just a bit

Streetfighting cats & dogs who fight crime-it's a multicultural comic-it's Catillac Cats meets Street Fighter. They meet with other groups of streetfighting cats & dogs around their town, the country and the world and become allies and help in their fight against evil and become part of their group, & fight evil streetfighting cats and dogs.
The heroes will sometimes become superheroes & the villians supervillians.
Typical things that happen-they find a valubale mineral reseve under the town-the military gets involved and the bad guys want to get their hands on the mineral.
The heroes work on some new defense tech and the villians go and spy on them.
The villians plot to find ways to get rid of the heroes.
The heroes meet with pals/relatives and it's a chance to stop local baddies in those areas.
The main character decides to fight crime 'cause his dad was a cop.
His sidekick is more brains than brawn and they both have a scientific prodigy friend they go to for tech help.



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I have a doppelganger/clone that was was created from the hero as a result of some scientific experiment and he turned out to be evil, and he was just created, either intentionally or by accident. What would his first PUBLIC act of violence or evil be? Initially and logically he'd do something to hurt the hero before going out in public. The clone is the arch-villain in the series and he vies to eventually get back at the hero and destroy him and his friends- he wants to get rid of all the heroes and take over the town and eventually the world and make it a safe haven for him and other baddies. He also eventually starts a gang to help him.
The best I could do for his first evil PUBLIC act of violence or evil was terrorize and torture a group of scouts and steal their Swiss knives. I wanted it to be something heinous-he's sort of on a journey of self-discovery to find out how bad he can be.
I thought of making him steal money but he'd have to have a reason for doing that and he'd have to discover the value of money.
Does anyone have any suggestions as to how to improve on this, or suggestions for better ideas that would work? Please let me know.
Other people suggested:
The evil clone should either witness a public local appearance of some celeb, steal someone's tickets out of curiousity and attack the celeb, or witness a local robbery, assist the robbers and assault the hostages and make sure it's all caught on tape.
In either scenario he'd get notoriety points.

The main characters are called Tuffy and Bull.
There's also Ruffy Tuffy's brother and Trump, Tuffy's black counterpart.

Malice, Wrath, Ox, and Knave are Tuffy's, Ruffy's, Bull's and Trump's evil counterparts, respectively.

I need help with the following. I have one story in which the main hero get cloned accidentally, and an evil clone is created. The evil clone spites the hero and runs off. the clone is on a journey
of self-discovery some what to find out who he is and what he wants. He meets an old man using a laptop to do online trading in the park who breifly teaches him the value of money and that he needs it to survive and gives him a few dollars and sends him on his way. the clone gets hungry and steals a boy's sandwich. The father sees this and confronts the clone. The clone picks the boy's dad up and threatens to kill him by holding him over shark- or gator-infested waters. He does this in front of the boy. The hero shows up and stops him and the hero and clone fight.

The clone's plan is to eventually take over the city making it a safehaven for criminals, and to destroy and/or get rid of the heroes.

I want to give the clone his first evil public act of violence, but using what I have here, how do I make this stronger and make it flow smoother? Please let me know. Thank you.

This is a kids' comic-I'm not going ti have blood or killing.

Hey guys it was fun checking out your comics, thanks for sharing em I like the synopsis on your comic funkiemonkey!

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Well my comic is in it's 4th season. It's not a popular comic, and it's only done on notebook paper with 3x27 boxes on each page.

The comic is called Saiba City Life, and it's storyline doesn't have much of a plot, but it has it's funny moments. Currently, I have about half of the previous season, and most of the 4th season online.

Season 3.2 is here [link]
While Season 4 is here [link]

Enjoy.

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I am currently drawing a comic about two superpowered transexuals who steal things.

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I started a comic recently about a boy who finds out he's a werewolf. It was originally a fan work for a Werewolf: the Forsaken character, but I decided to modify the world so it bears little resemblance to the Werewolf setting. Haven't gotten to the werewolf part in the story yet, but if you want check it out at [link] I got two pages so far...

Socrates epic...

Go on a quest, find the shiney thing, save the princess, slay the dragon, save the world.

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