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What do you think of my new track?

:icontheponylovingkitsune:
ThePonyLovingKitsune Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
Here it is:

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I'm gonna release it on Bandcamp [maybe] when I've got a video and remixes and stuff. :)
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:icongabrielleragusi:
gabrielleragusi Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
I think the main voice is too fast and the result is that I can hear the shots between the voice and the background sounds.
For the rest, I'm not too expert in this type of music ;)
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:icontheponylovingkitsune:
ThePonyLovingKitsune Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
Okay. :)

It's only my 2nd actual track and I only have a limited amount of tools. :|

Also what do you mean by shots. The background and vocals are all part of the same track so what do you mean?
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:icongabrielleragusi:
gabrielleragusi Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
Ok, now it makes sense. Usually, they suggest to divide the whole thing in single elements (except for who starts working on something from zero), so the result won't be messed up, but in this case you have only one track: the fact is that having the vocal on the same track as the background, you can't slow down the vocal without the rest and that's why I hear shots... it's not that I imagine things, but try to slow it down and you will hear the difference yourself. It's like the background goes against the vocal because it's too fast. I wonder if you will be able to understand since it's really difficult to explain something so abstract.
Which software do you use?
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:icontheponylovingkitsune:
ThePonyLovingKitsune Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
the demo version of FL Studio 10.
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:icongabrielleragusi:
gabrielleragusi Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
I see. I don't know it very well, but just try what I told you (if you want) ;)
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:iconmacerider:
MaceRider Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I hate your name and on that basis alone refuse to listen to your music.
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:icontheponylovingkitsune:
ThePonyLovingKitsune Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
I hate your name so we're even.
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:iconmacerider:
MaceRider Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconimhappyplz:

Original.
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:icongabrielleragusi:
gabrielleragusi Jan 2, 2013   Digital Artist
What's wrong with his name?
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:iconmacerider:
MaceRider Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That doesn't really concern you.
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