Finally learned how to post stories
So I finally learned how to post short stories in the gallery and posted a few of my stories in it. I was wondering if some people could stop on my page and give it a read, tell me what you think of it and how it is. Specifically I'd like opinions on the one titled 'a gypsy story' as that's the most science fiction of what I posted. Anyone want to lend a hand, it would me very much appreciated.
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As =star-blazer said, this would be better suited to the monthly critique thread in the literature forum. Please be sure to read the forum descriptions before you post to make sure you are posting in the correct area.
This post would be better suited for the Literature Forum in the Monthly Critique Thread 
The one up is still for December and going to be locked later today so the January one can be posted, but later today it will be able to post in.
The one up is still for December and going to be locked later today so the January one can be posted, but later today it will be able to post in.