Challenge Fun #13 - Win 3 Month PM or Points!
Your challenge for this week is inspired by 'This Is Just To Say' by William Carlos Williams:
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
Please fill in the gaps to the below piece! The person who comes up with the best one wins a 3 Month Premium Membership or 636
One poem/post only, and please make it coherent.
I have ________
________
that were ________
________
and which
you were probably
________
________
Forgive me
they were ________
so ________
and so ________
Deadline: Monday 28th July
Have fun!
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
Please fill in the gaps to the below piece! The person who comes up with the best one wins a 3 Month Premium Membership or 636
One poem/post only, and please make it coherent.
I have ________
________
that were ________
________
and which
you were probably
________
________
Forgive me
they were ________
so ________
and so ________
Deadline: Monday 28th July
Have fun!
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I have flushed your poor goldfish
right down the toilet,
that were most likely belly up
for at least a good long month.
and which
you were probably
wondering whether you should check on dear Chippy and Golly
after being gone on that trip for what seemed like forever
Forgive me
they were smelly and rotten
so obvious that no one had fed them
and so obvious that they were dead.
right down the toilet,
that were most likely belly up
for at least a good long month.
and which
you were probably
wondering whether you should check on dear Chippy and Golly
after being gone on that trip for what seemed like forever
Forgive me
they were smelly and rotten
so obvious that no one had fed them
and so obvious that they were dead.
I have been asleep for far too long
held prisoner by a world of dreams
that were of my own creation
though not what I intended
and which
you were probably
unaware of what lead us here, my selfish desire
to bask in the fire of my lovers ever burning flames
Forgive me
they were such tricksters, but I wanted to believe as I drank their elixir
so by the dusk of night & each dawning day we come so close yet still far away
and so you my rising sun forever to search in vain, while I your moon in my eternal slumber remain.
held prisoner by a world of dreams
that were of my own creation
though not what I intended
and which
you were probably
unaware of what lead us here, my selfish desire
to bask in the fire of my lovers ever burning flames
Forgive me
they were such tricksters, but I wanted to believe as I drank their elixir
so by the dusk of night & each dawning day we come so close yet still far away
and so you my rising sun forever to search in vain, while I your moon in my eternal slumber remain.
I have learned
well
that were brokenhearteds
everywhere
and which
you were probably
unaware
of
Forgive me
they were begging
so much
and so sad
well
that were brokenhearteds
everywhere
and which
you were probably
unaware
of
Forgive me
they were begging
so much
and so sad
I have torn out
the stitches
that were binding
my mind
and which
you were probably
hoping
were the cure
Forgive me
they were pulling
so scratchy
and so fragile
the stitches
that were binding
my mind
and which
you were probably
hoping
were the cure
Forgive me
they were pulling
so scratchy
and so fragile
I have beaten
all of the kids
that were bugging you
the other day
and which
you were probably
thinking I was violent
that I went overboard again
Forgive me
they were so rude to you
so fat
and so juicy
I have seen the pain of loss among the living.
The sense of sadness and tears
that were lingering inside the cold room,
where the grieving members stayed.
and which
you were probably
There to offer a warm and comforting hand to them.
One of whom is my father.
Forgive me
they were so many deaths throughout the past few years.
so many great people who and my family loved.
and so While they are partaking in the great rest above. We will never forget them and keep their memories alive, through our thoughts and our hearts.
Pardon me, this was the first time I ever did something like this. Yeah..alot of emotional baggage..
The sense of sadness and tears
that were lingering inside the cold room,
where the grieving members stayed.
and which
you were probably
There to offer a warm and comforting hand to them.
One of whom is my father.
Forgive me
they were so many deaths throughout the past few years.
so many great people who and my family loved.
and so While they are partaking in the great rest above. We will never forget them and keep their memories alive, through our thoughts and our hearts.
Pardon me, this was the first time I ever did something like this. Yeah..alot of emotional baggage..
I have dreamt of a life as a mother,
Raising the three demigods
that were distracting me from this madness you call society,
all ensnaring me with their intangible, unending loyalty.
And which
you were probably
Wondering, "Where has she gone? She's not out for days!"
I wallow fitfully in the moment, deep in slumber, dreaming away.
Forgive me
They were all that I've loved for the past 2 years
So very welcoming
And so viciously possessive.
I don't intend to win
I'm not sure if I manage to capture the gist of my dreams, but there you go!
Raising the three demigods
that were distracting me from this madness you call society,
all ensnaring me with their intangible, unending loyalty.
And which
you were probably
Wondering, "Where has she gone? She's not out for days!"
I wallow fitfully in the moment, deep in slumber, dreaming away.
Forgive me
They were all that I've loved for the past 2 years
So very welcoming
And so viciously possessive.
I don't intend to win
I'm not sure if I manage to capture the gist of my dreams, but there you go!
I have known
the silhouettes
that were born in
loving duets
And which
You were probably
Thinking
I'd forget
Forgive me
They were temperate
So summery
and so delicate
the silhouettes
that were born in
loving duets
And which
You were probably
Thinking
I'd forget
Forgive me
They were temperate
So summery
and so delicate
This one's my favorite it's beautiful!
That one is really good!
Thanks much
Where's yours?
Where's yours?
I never did this challenge, I don't really want to this time, don't know why.
I have reached for the moon and touched it
held the fury of suns in my palms
that were bruised and scarred and blistered
I have lost and I've fought and I've won.
And which
you were probably
dying to see, but I hid in the sock by your bed.
My mind wanders and trails empty crossroads
Forgive me.
They were better but I won instead.
so and so .
held the fury of suns in my palms
that were bruised and scarred and blistered
I have lost and I've fought and I've won.
And which
you were probably
dying to see, but I hid in the sock by your bed.
My mind wanders and trails empty crossroads
Forgive me.
They were better but I won instead.
so and so .
I have taken-up
the commandments
that were carelessly
cast aside
and which
you were probably
slandering
right now
Forgive me
they were from God
so Merciful
and so Pure
the commandments
that were carelessly
cast aside
and which
you were probably
slandering
right now
Forgive me
they were from God
so Merciful
and so Pure
I have three little gifts
For you
that were meant for your
broken heart
and which
you were probably
not given until you read
these words bleeding out from me
Forgive me
they were not meant to be
so was it ordained
and so it is meant to be
For you
that were meant for your
broken heart
and which
you were probably
not given until you read
these words bleeding out from me
Forgive me
they were not meant to be
so was it ordained
and so it is meant to be
I like it
yay
beautiful -- passionate (rather different from the humorous responses I expected)
Thanks. Stay blessed.
I have seen your posts
that were likely well made
and which
you were probably
proud and happy of
Forgive me
they were among many
so unseen
and so thus unappreciated
that were likely well made
and which
you were probably
proud and happy of
Forgive me
they were among many
so unseen
and so thus unappreciated
indeed
thanks
I have prayed
countless lines
that were loud
upon your deaf ears
and which
you were probably
listening, in truth,
but turned away
Forgive me
they were all for you
so you wouldn't have to pray
and so have to remember your voice.
countless lines
that were loud
upon your deaf ears
and which
you were probably
listening, in truth,
but turned away
Forgive me
they were all for you
so you wouldn't have to pray
and so have to remember your voice.