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Draw.... Words?

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BetweenSkill Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Now imagine this. There are some people in this world who are unable to picture things from words. It's crazy isn't it?

I know you guys are really creative, because I mean, we are Deviants are we not?

So let's see you guys have a go at some of this stuff.

Lake-bottom shanty spooks:
At the Bottom of the LakeWatch the little ripples dart across the deep-hued surface
A blue watch-glass that contorts itself to time
Wind and wakes turn ripples restless
Until they fall asleep and sink down
As little children might do again and over
But the wrinkles in the glassy fabric are never disturbed for long
Except by a thin, crisp splinter of a twig piercing it straight through
Giving hint to a lost place from countless years ago
A long lost hovel left to be home to no one

Dive beneath the mirror of the cold and blue-tinted clear lake
Where weight loses its meaning and gravity may cease
The sky is the ground yet to reflect the sky
All of this hidi


Depressing Ship:
The Ship of RegretSailing on to the edge
Onward the sails billow
Pulling the Ship to oblivion
The Ship of Regret

The oars of splintered age
Hang limply in defeat
Breaking the surface of a thousand drops
Not a single one left disturbed

The tears of joy long since dried
Fresh laid to fall
Dreams carried in their wake with no tethers left to bind
They lay forgotten and lost to the drift of time

Sailing on to the edge
Onward the sails billow
Pulling the Ship to oblivion
The Ship of Regret

Time apart from its passing
The currents no longer at the helm of the wheel
The rudder lays oblong along the cracked frame
Leaving it to be led by the whimsy o


The little minion that could:
Oh! MinionOh! little minion
How dost though stir out from nothingness
To creep about the ground stained with your comrades
Shuffling with stubby steps
Clothed in the color of your deathless devotion
One that leads to inevitable demise
Only to have yet another form spring into animation
To rise and fall in mindless task

Oh! little minion
Are you scared of the death you always must meet
The lack of fear grip frightening to you
When the arcane tower alights with your imminent doom
A crackling, blazing, blue blob of death
To smite your form hidden from vision underneath thine robes
Perhaps being nothing but a face to hideous to witness
Or an
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Zezkah Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist

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BetweenSkill Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Well that is definitely one sad looking boat ;)
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FeraNoMo79 Jan 16, 2013
From "The little minion that could"
wow I have such a twisted disgusting imagination... I have no excuse for the abomination I have created...
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BetweenSkill Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
The most twisted minds are always the most fun ones to live in :)
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FeraNoMo79 Jan 16, 2013
Oh no! DX I don't want a twisted mind! I'm normal sooooo normal!!! See? :) normal.
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Jade-Abarai-Kat Jan 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
this would actully be really good if you worked on it somemore
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FeraNoMo79 Jan 16, 2013
Oh my... Well it's just a forum post. I'm sorry? D:
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Jade-Abarai-Kat Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
no i didn't me it as a insult, i was just saying i really like what you did =(
im sorry
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FeraNoMo79 Jan 17, 2013
Oh! haha No, no, thank you. I'm just really bad with criticism so ya... hawkward.
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Jade-Abarai-Kat Jan 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
lol ><
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