I am collecting every little information about the American Civil War. It was translated (too many times), and now the English doesn't make sense and some English words that are out of context (or doesn't exist). I tried editing it but made it worse. Someone who is familiar with the American Civil War enough to reword it, know how to rewrite it. The fourth sentence especially requires someone who knows about the civil war. Familiar with 1861, Fort Sumter, the first battle, Major Robert Anderson. Just reword it to make better sense and sound natural to the English language (and more human sounding, although all of it was humanly translated). Very small piece. I can't ask anyone I know, because they don't even know anything about the civil war. Note: This is the very first time this has ever happened.

If no one can help, then if someone can direct me to someone who can help with this.