the proportions seem to be a bit off. the hand/arm looks really thin compared to the overall look and feel of the model. especially the thumb - it seems a bit too unreal. the expression, eyes and the face are all good but that arm/hand really needs to improve. otherwise a great draw ! sorry i have to decline this but i tried to site to the reasons hope you are OK with it. and keep on trying - you are already good !
Here is the Article in which your work will be featured.
I will keep updating it all September.
So just leave a big thumbnail of your best September Work ( only 1, if you leave more than 1 thumbnails you will not be considered. )
Looking forward to your work !
And once again only 1 best work submitted during this September.