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The fucking MOTHER of Mary-Sues

:icondragonflae:
Dragonflae Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
Holy mother of the gods :stare:

I'm beside myself.

Last night, I was chatting with my friend :iconshadowkyogre: and she showed me this character for a roleplay group she's evidently part of.

I...I just...:iconeratsplz:

Here's the profile. with a bit edited out for the sake of dA's no sexy talk policies.

"Looks can be decieving but i can tell you, I'm much more then just a Pretty Face and a good body, think I'm weak then Try you luck, just don't cry When i kick your Ass". - Mimiko


Name: Mimiko Z Kyokujitsu
Species:
hybrid/human/Elf/anthro/raccoon/Dragon/Demon/Goddess/(Unbirthed by D Rydia)
Sex: Female
Height: 57
Weight: 105 pounds
Hair Length: Waist Length
Breast size: D cup
Eye Color: purple
Hair color: black
Age: 20
Family: Korei Kyokujitsu (mother)
Zero Enigma (father)
Ace Ryumaru (uncle)
Aoi Kyokujitsu (Half Sister)
Hitomi Kyokujitsu (Half Sister)
Nero Nagareboshi (Half Brother)
Rose (Grandmother)
Munashi Enigma (Younger brother)
Koden Enigma (Youngest Brother)
Heero Enigma (Half Brother)
Nazo Enigma (2nd youngest brother)
Shizuka Darkstar ((Daughter)
Mika Kyokujitsu (Unbirthed Rydia))
Saya Kyokujitsu (((Unbirthed Mina))
D Rydia (Daughter Unbirthed)
Synthia (Sister in law)
Cody G Enigma (Nephew)
Carolyne (Neice)
Yumi Enigma (Neice)
Haruhi Kyokujitsu (Daughter)
Alice D Kyokujitsu (Daughter)
Pred/prey: 50%/50%
Friends: Shin Kitsune, Frungi, Ardoth, Ragna
Enemies: Pin, Solguard (Shits ang giggles till her daughter was brought into the mix)
Clothing: Black hooded jumper (Outfit 1)
Black and Red Jumper (Outfit 2)
Black Trenchcoat (Outfit 3)
A Black Jumpsuit, Longer hood, enough to cover her eyes (Outfit 4)
A Hooded black trench coat with a Z on the back (Outfit 5)
Jeans (Every outfit)

Special Abilities:
Regeneration: can heal and regrow parts of her body
Aura Sense: ability to see and manipulate
Lighning manipulation: she can manipulate lighting into weapon and shoot it
Fire Manipulation: Can Manipulate Fire Now
Transform: Can transform into her Ultimate Goddess Form
Water Manipulation: Manipulates Water
Earth Manipulation: Manipulates Earth
Wind Manipulation: Manipulates Wind
Nature Manipulation: Manipulates the trees
Ice Manipulation: Can Manipulate and control Ice
Space Manipulation: Can Manipulate Space and teleport anywhere in the Universe
Time Manipulation: Can stop time or speed it up or slow it down
Gravity Manipulatiion: Can manipulate gravity making something as heavy as a planet or as light as a feather
Darkness Manipulation: can control The shadows and Darkness it's self
Light Manipulation: Can manipulate light
Judgement: All the Elements into a sphere of Danger
Strength: she can lift 3 times her own weight (Has changed since she became a goddess)
telepathy: can speak through her mind and hear others thoughts
Illusion's: Can bring out a person's darkest fears from looking into her hypnotic purple eyes, can also use reflections like water or mirrors.
Forms: Human (20 year old)
Ultimate Goddess
Demon Form
Chris Form
Summonings: 8 Headed Hydra
Mate/boyfriend: Rydia (Was Ardoth)
Currently in Human form and Pregnant to Rydia
Personal Notes: Since Mimiko was given everything and treated like a princess by her family and lover, she actually enjoys being pushed around, even she won't admit it, actions like slapping, grabbing, forcing, yelling makes her somewhat lalalalala, depending how much she is dominated.




I just...I can't even...

How is this not a parody?!

:iconstareexplodeplz:

Somebody kill me.

tl;dr HOLY MOTHER OF MARY SUES, BATMAN!
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:iconfangirl-of-cuteness:
Fangirl-of-Cuteness Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's worse than Ebony Darkness Dementia Ravenway. (I think that's her name.) :iconwthplz:
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:iconvyanni-krace-ace:
Vyanni-Krace-ACE Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bloody hell that is so terrifyingly Mary-Sue it physically hurts to look at it.
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:iconcrescentmoon2002:
Crescentmoon2002 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Now that's some Mary-sue....
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:iconapatheticbunny:
ApAtHeTIcBuNnY Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How do you even make a hybrid/human/Elf/anthro/raccoon/Dragon/Demon/Goddess anyway?

some sort of unholy orgy?
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:iconjag-01:
JAG-01 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I like my theory that she's really a Lovecraftian horror a la Yog Shogoth.
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:iconladydata:
LadyData Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The character's info is too much emphasis on her powers and family members :faint: This looks like she's definitely that perfect example of a Mary Sue.
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:iconjag-01:
JAG-01 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
"Looks can be decieving but i can tell you, I'm much more then just a Pretty Face and a good body, think I'm weak then Try you luck, just don't cry When i kick your Ass". - Mimiko

She says, but then...


Personal Notes: Since Mimiko was given everything and treated like a princess by her family and lover, she actually enjoys being pushed around, even she won't admit it, actions like slapping, grabbing, forcing, yelling makes her somewhat lalalalala, depending how much she is dominated.

So she'll kick you ass if you call her weak, but she gets off on being smacked around like a bitch.

I would buy this, except...

Species:
hybrid/human/Elf/anthro/raccoon/Dragon/Demon/Goddess/(Unbirthed by D Rydia)


...her visage is so abhorrent that her own creator can't decipher what the hell she's supposed to be. Judging from how much of her makes no damn sense at all, I'd say that he was driven rather mad by it.
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:iconsinfullycute:
SinfullyCute Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
People overpower their characters too much. =D
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:iconxsanrio:
xSanrio Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
First of all, reading that Mary Sue gave me a headache. .

Second. I love how people are accusing you of not being a good friend because you posted this and humiliated her behind her back. When clearly SHE WAS NOT THE ONE WHO MADE THE CHARACTER.

I don't know which one pisses me off more.

._.
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:iconshadowkyogre:
ShadowKyogre Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:S Dude, I'm not the one who made the character. I'm not sure how people are getting this impression, but ~Dragonflae tries to clear this up whenever she can. This character she's showing is what a friend of mine showed me (character doesn't belong to them either).
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:iconxsanrio:
xSanrio Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, I know. I know.

I'm just saying that it's kind of annoying how people are saying that they're a bad friend, etc etc because they haven't cared to read the rest of the post where it says that the character was not created by you or anyone else. Just something that someone found. You know?
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:iconshadowkyogre:
ShadowKyogre Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:nod: Indeed. Amazing how people can skim over stuff!
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:iconamaryllisir:
Amaryllisir Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconstareexplodeplz:

My god.
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:iconaviscelox:
AvisCelox Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How is this still going?

"Mate/boyfriend: Rydia (Was Ardoth)
Currently in Human form and Pregnant to Rydia"

So her boyfriend is her unborn child? :iconupsidedownstareplz:
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:iconmori101:
Mori101 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am laughing so hard right now
Just
HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE

YOU CANNOT LEGITIMATELY MAKE A CHARACTER THIS BAD
OH MY GOD
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:iconvalronic:
Valronic Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
These kinds of characters have a place but its hard to make a main character like this and still have an interesting story.

Also just out of curiosity what is your definition of mary sue? (no don't just point to the openning post)
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:iconcryophase:
Cryophase Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Waitwait, the Mary Sue maker is the friend you linked in the first post?


I found this story funny, but you're kind of an asshole, just sayin :lol:
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:icondragonflae:
Dragonflae Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
No, smartass. My friend simply showed it to me, it's not hers.
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:iconcryophase:
Cryophase Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's what I thought at first, though the wording makes it kinda confusing
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:iconnicholai-nii:
Nicholai-nii Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHY IS THIS FORUM STILL GOING?! :nuu:
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:iconuranus-seventhsun:
Uranus-seventhsun Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist
I wish you hadn't shared her page. Way to humiliate her, kid. That said, I stopped at the D-cup breast size.
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:icondragonflae:
Dragonflae Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
She's not the one who invented the character :iconfacepalmplz:
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:iconuranus-seventhsun:
Uranus-seventhsun Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist
Ah, OK, she was just sharing it.
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:iconshadowkyogre:
ShadowKyogre Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:S How the heck are people thinking that I made THAT thing?
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:icondragonflae:
Dragonflae Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
I clear it up when I can :stare:
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:iconredfoxbennaton:
Redfoxbennaton Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Superman is the best MarySue.
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:iconrainbowkitty777:
rainbowkitty777 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
At least he has weaknesses.
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:iconredfoxbennaton:
Redfoxbennaton Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Like me! I am the real super villian.
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:iconskurrly:
SKuRRly Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Artist
Friend?
I don't think someone is much of your friend if you post behind their back in the forums. Mebbe you should share this with her like "friends" do. :lol:

But that's an OC. OCs can't be Mary Sues. They're fan characters with too many powers (and usually are a recolor of an existing character from the series). But you might get where I'm coming from.
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:iconrainbowkitty777:
rainbowkitty777 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's not ~ShadowKyogre's character.

'Last night, I was chatting with my friend ~ShadowKyogre and she showed me this character for a roleplay group she's evidently part of.'
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:icondr-j33:
Dr-J33 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Student Writer
(Slowly takes off sunglasses)

My god.........
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:iconensoul:
ensoul Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Professional General Artist
"Judgement: All the Elements into a sphere of Danger"

...danger zooone
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:iconkoui:
Koui Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013   General Artist
gah! that character sounds as boring as hell X[
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:iconmajatek:
Majatek Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If I were you, I'd tell her that for all the amazing things that her character can do, it ends up making the character bland, and ordinary due to the fact that the "defining feature/s" of this character is that it has none because it's perfect.

:|
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:iconmadame-rien:
Madame-Rien Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Umm okayyyy that is a lot of abilities and unrealistic proportions ( at least in the human world) l, I am not sure of the charter is like in the world they live, so I don't know 100% Mary sue but it sounds like they can do petty much everything :D
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:iconhkepoetry:
hkepoetry Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now that is some shit. :roll:

I wonder whether that type of hybrid species would even look sexy. Also, a D-cup on someone that skinny is impossible, since the BMI for someone with that height and weight is way too underweight to be considered healthy (below 17,5 BMI = anorexic, according to doctors). Heck, I bet she wouldn't even have a B-cup.

If this character is not a Mary-Sue, then I don't know what.
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:iconhearts-are-cold:
Hearts-Are-Cold Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh god, I'm dying.
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:iconwedge-the-hedge:
Wedge-The-Hedge Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Lol. Oh boy.
Read this. Only Furaffinity would have something so beautiful.

4 Years Old: Don was a homeless kid who didn't have a family, and no memory of where he came from. He also had a companion cat (an Exceed) that watched over him through his young life.

9-10 Years old: Don was found half dead with broken body parts (including his legs) on a dirt road outside of town, and two men found and saved him. He became apart of a same sex family and was nurtured back to health/along with becoming apart of their family. He loved his new family, and spent alot of time with his father). Bound by a wheelchair for awhile, he used a Chaos Emerald he found periodically to heal himself (only for other effects to happen).

15 Years Old: Don learns to walk again, starts to take care of his home when his family went missing (including farming and cleaning), and gained some new abilities as a growing person (including finding the Chaos Emeralds and meeting new friends). he constantly waits for his family to come back home.

21 Years Old: Don attends Duel Academy to further himself in education and just basic stuff, also learning about where he came form somewhat, while maturing into a strong person. He takes part in Dueling, and becomes very skilled in this game.

26 Years Old: Don becomes a Trucker for a job, while searching for his missing family members, and learns to wield the Keyblade (and mastering new moves). He meets old/new friends and forms a Hero group in ways to save the world from different problems. Becomes well known through out the world, and his friends are considered his family also.

35-40 Years Old: After finding his family, he takes on a more older look (after his adoptive father) and is alot stronger than before. He does adventuring ever so often, along with trucking, and tries his best to take it easy on himself (also his companion starts to take on his looks)
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:iconsauti-alamisi:
Sauti-Alamisi Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is this an Anthro character, hence it came from Furaffinity?
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:iconwedge-the-hedge:
Wedge-The-Hedge Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
Yup.
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:iconcryophase:
Cryophase Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I stopped at "chaos emerald" :lol:
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:iconensoul:
ensoul Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional General Artist
So basically everyone in this universe slowly becomes a middle-aged keyblade-wielding trucker?
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:iconzalcoti:
Zalcoti Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013   Digital Artist
Might as well say this character wins the game! How do you even play such a character without breaking something in the first 5 seconds?
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:icontrampire:
Trampire Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Is there anything that character can't do???
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:iconthecreativepen:
thecreativepen Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013   Traditional Artist
Let's also point out that her character has a BMI equivalent to someone who is anorexic.

Also..that whole description screams Mary Sue.
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:iconomgwtfbbqplz:
omgwtfbbqplz Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
I hope this is a satire. :icondisappointplz:
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:iconwr0:
wr0 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
---E lol tl;dr as well. i don't even... those long list of attacks and names ;w;
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:icondragonflae:
Dragonflae Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Holy mother of flying fuck, this thread is still running!?
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:iconjynxeddraca:
JynxedDraca Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconkillitwithfireplz:
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:icontaste-of-teal:
taste-of-teal Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
.... I don't even
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