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"I think this is driving me crazy, lately people have been saying things like "your diffrent" or "your very mature for such age" or "Come on your a teen your supposed to do these things". People please I beg, do not judge by age, I mean just because I'm a teen does not mean I am excused for bieng stupid. I don't expect anyone to see..a teen jumping around in a very immature way and say "Oh he's a teen" well that explains it very much! I hate when I argue with my friends they have a hard time understanding me, they never have a point in there sayings, they say I am too hard to figure out -_-
Grow up people I'm not diffrent I just use my brain in a very diffrent way than you do!"
~Threadmeopen in I'm too mature?
'Your' is a possessive word, as in: Your frequent use of 'your' in place of 'you're', which is the contraction of "you are", is very annoying. 'Different' is not spelled 'diffrent'. 'Being' is not spelled 'bieng'. Awkward sentence structure is harder to read and understand when spoken, as shown in the green examples below.
"I think this is driving me crazy", what is driving you crazy? "I'm too mature' is driving you crazy? Is miscellaneous this driving you crazy? There is no clarification in the opening sentence of what 'this' is? "that explains it very much", why is there a redundant use of 'very much' on the end of that sentence? "I hate when I argue with my friends they have a hard time understanding me", why aren't these two points separated with the use of a comma or a full stop? "People please I beg", why does this confusing sentence fragment exist in such an awkward form. 'Such an age' and not "such age"
- just said that so you wouldn't have to tell me what I already know, thanks]
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I think this is driving me crazy, lately people have been saying things like "your diffrent" or "your very mature for such age" or "Come on your a teen your supposed to do these things". People please I beg, do not judge by age, I mean just because I'm a teen does not mean I am excused for bieng stupid. I don't expect anyone to see..a teen jumping around in a very immature way and say "Oh he's a teen" well that explains it very much! I hate when I argue with my friends they have a hard time understanding me, they never have a point in there sayings, they say I am too hard to figure out -_-
Grow up people I'm not diffrent I just use my brain in a very diffrent way than you do!