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February 1, 2013


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Monthly Literature Critique Thread: February

Beccalicious Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013   Writer
Posting Guidelines: Monthly Lit critique: February

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:bulletblue: This thread is for critique requests for literature deviations only. Please only post if you are interested in revising your writing and wish to receive honest critique
:bulletblue If you would like critique, please post a comment with a direct link or thumb to your deviation.
:bulletblue: Please refrain from posting entire texts in comments.
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:bulletorange: When giving critique, please remember to be constructive, not destructive.
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PE: Literature Critique Tips

Previous Month: January

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Devious Comments

Beccalicious Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013   Writer
New month! :la:

TristanCody Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
If anyone needs a critique on a poem or short story, I will gladly do it.
TristanCody Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Writer
On a low point right now. I was hoping some critiques and ideas could get me going: Hair Strand HandsThe hand is a hair strand
upon the black mechanic
who articulated a nation
from candle wicks and ash.
natej91 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

A short story (1,800 words) I wrote last night.

Unsure whether it can be classed as a short story. Tell me what you would call it.

Thankyou in advance for reading and critiquing :)
DorianHarper Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Professional Writer
Critiqued :D
Kohou Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Chapter 2. I'm looking for as much input as possible, and also any general suggestions. I want to improve my writing as much as I can.

Chapter 1 is on my profile.
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