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January 17, 2013
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I made a comic series...

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Sniper0092 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
But I don't get a lot of comments, so I was wondering if you wanted to read the long story short and tell me if it needs improvement, you can also see the comic in my gallery.
The story so far.....
In 2050, humanity makes contact with aliens.
Over time, they helped make medication, and advanced technology.
But in 2060, a human rebel alliance raged war against the world.
This rebel alliance is known as, the kasara.
The military then formed a special army of genetically augmented cops, they helped a lot.
But the kasara is more powerful...
In 2098, a genetics scientists named Dr. Cole had an idea: To clone and train a cybernetic raptor army, thus project: CYBORG begins...
After 2 years of training, 4 of the most skilled raptors separate to different locations to stop the kasara.
Raiku-001 chose to protect Atlanta, he is one of the city's last defense...
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neurotype Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:lock: Feedback requests belong in the Monthly Critique Thread or the Thumbshare Forum. Lit Forum posting guidelines (includes links): [link]
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Bluemoon-Monsta Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
I enjoy reading them...tho commenting isn't my strong suit...
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