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do u guys tink i rite good?? bcuz im rly talented and no1 can c it

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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
well my book
The Bite of the Darkness
is famis and im gona get it published wen i finish it
but dere r sooooooo many haters!!!!!!!1 can u tell me if u like it den pls giv me lamas
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namenotrequired Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Interface Designer
Please feel free to use the monthly critique thread to request critique on literature that you have as deviations :) Otherwise, this doesn't belong in this forum, please see the Forum Posting Guidelines.

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UnrehearsedSplendour Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional General Artist
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Disaster-N-Beauty Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist
How are you going to get your book published if you write in internet-speak? ): Even your stories are written similarly. I'm not trying to be mean, but if you're looking for advice, you should try and write correctly.
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indi-dere Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd buy it so I could give it as a gift to my English teacher. We'd all get A's for the semester because his standards will be lowered dramatically.

That is all.
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Lovely-Words Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't tell if you're for real or not...
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SmarticleParticle Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Are you an Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way RP account?
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NO WTF I HATE HER
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SmarticleParticle Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Funny, you have a very similar character and vocabulary. Imitation is, after all, the sincerest form of flattery. ;)
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NO. NO WAY. I AM SIK OF HEERING DIS. DAT GURL IS DUMA ND STUPID AND I FUKING HATE HARRY POTER
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
?
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
I just find it somewhat interesting that you're asking about publishing a novel on a forum where you can't even use basic grammar and spelling.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
WAT R U TLAKING BAOT
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Look at how you're writing. No one is going to take you seriously if you can't even formulate a proper sentence with proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
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Potato-Priestess Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
No one's going to buy it.
The story is bad, and your characters are Mary-Sues.
Editors would have a headache explaining to you what a real book is.
Not to mention it's too short to be a book, unless it's a kids book.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NO
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Potato-Priestess Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Like I said, since it's short, it seems like a children's book.
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writeritalian14 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
no one is going to publish that if its already on the internet, do sone editing and i will read it. dont belive me? print it out and go to a publisher.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
wtf
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writeritalian14 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
is what you say when you look in the mirror.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NO
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twipplestoast Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012   Writer
It is the honest truth. Posting one or two chapters to gather interest is alright, but once you post your entire story it's considered published.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
y
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
She is right with her comment. Most of the time, publishers don't accept work that has been previously published since they want first publishing rights. Publishing your work online counts as publishing in their eyes and since the work is available for free, they often don't want to sign it if people can just access it themselves.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
o
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Having a chapter or two up to get some readers and people interested in it is one thing, but if the whole story or a majority of it is online, publishers see it as already published.
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sarahjaderoseblood Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
WAT TE FUK
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DorianHarper Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Writer
It's how the industry works.
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