Please tell me what you think of my story? Feedback would be appreciated!

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~Breeziiee Dec 21, 2012

Hello there. (: If you wouldn't mind checking out my story, that would mean so much to me!
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Devious Comments

^neurotype Dec 21, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I see you've already been helped; please review the Lit Forum posting guidelines as well. [link]

~Lytrigian Dec 21, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

If you're just trying to attract readers, Thumbshare forum. If you want critique, monthly critique sticky thread at the top of this forum.

*DamonWakes Dec 21, 2012 Writer

This would be much more at home in the Critique Thread.