I don't know seems okay but if you're using that as a description alone no. Just no sorry but that's the sort of thing you put on top, and then space and then explain like who the person is, what has happened. Also it sounds like something that would began in the prologue like you said when their running in the blizzard.
Although you said you want the readers to read it to find out what they are, warn you now don't go to long leaving that as a mystery because they'll lose interest and want understand.
Like people said the New Orlean witch thing is very common but to be honest a lot of the things were books take place are. And there is reason for that because of the back story of the city and people its only logical that a witch is from New Orleans and not somewhere in Montana. But maybe she's from New Orleans but doesn't live there at the moment? Maybe she lives in a smaller more unknown city outside of it?
Also you said you're a wattpad writer and I wanna hug you now because I think you're the only wattpad writer I've known of that I've seen of these forums and I must ask for your wattpad username, I'll fan you. Because I'd like to read the story when you're writing it and I'll do the feedback thing-ing lol I write on Wattpad although not very known at all. Not at all. O_O
oh the witch lives in Romania hahaha1 Oh sure it's JadenSherriff hahaha i tried to make it as diffrent as possible actually i am actually almost fineshed with the first chapter! thank you so much! I am not known that much either but i still post!
Ooooh okay, by reading everything it looked like she was from New Orleans, Romania sounds cool though although I haven't done much research on it, I think theres a lot of wereolf stories from there. I don't know. O_o
Thats cool! lol I just fanned you! ^-^ lol XD If anytime need anything and you're not sure about it don't be afraid to message me, I always reply back and happy to help people. lol ^-^
long answer = because they're afraid of failure and even potential failure. if enough people like their idea, that must AUTOMATICALLY MEAN what they write will also be liked. however, this is not how it works and they have not learned this at this juncture in their writing journey.
Yeah pretty much sums it up. I had a screenwriting teacher who pushed me to do those things and it was the best advice I'd ever had. People should just be happy anyone's trying to help at all. Oh well watcha gonna do.
Write it This seems more of a summary than a description. We don't get that much information from it other than the fact that there used to be 1000 of something and now there are 50, and are being chased by a New Orleans witch. So, not much.
yeah. I mean i dont know what to do with it like how to start it off. I know i want to start it off with the vampires running in a snowy blizzard and yeah thats it i suck at description so i need the help with that