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December 8, 2012
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ZurithePersistent Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Hey i made a story about my school day read it, THNKS
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neurotype Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:lock: *merrak has provided the links to the forums you need to try for feedback. Please review the Lit Forum guidelines before posting in future: [link]
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merrak Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Before this gets locked, I should point out that nobody says, "IDK."

Jerome Stern wrote a great book, -Making Shapely Fiction-. I'd suggest reading it. It has some great pointers on writing dialogue and effective dialect.
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ZurithePersistent Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
u guysare always kicking me out of the forums. i cant make anything!
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merrak Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
Don't worry... nobody is kicking you out of the forums. It's just if advertisements for exposure were allowed in the lit section, it's all it would become. Plus, there's already a critique section and a thumbshare forum.
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merrak Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
If you want critique, head over here: [link]

If you just want some exposure and readers, try here: [link]
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ZurithePersistent Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
oh where is that
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