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What do you think of my poem? Can you help me make it sound better?

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Gossamier Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
What do you think of my poem?

you can read it here:

[link]

or here:

Magnets




Our love is like a magnet
Even if I'm negative
You try and stay positive
People try to Put us with people Just like us
But we keep our distance
No matter what they try
We attract each other
Cause our love is like a magnet
alone, we may seem weak
but together we're Strong
Our Hearts will Stay Unique
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neurotype Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:lock: Looking for feedback? Try the Thumbshare forum or the monthly crit thread. Lit forum posting guidelines: [link]
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