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November 27, 2012
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Any fantasy lovers want to read my story?

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The-Vibeke Nov 27, 2012
I have a story called "The Seventh". It's an original tale part of a larger extended saga.

Basically the main character is being hunted . . . she's the last of her kind and their very blood is like the physical form of magic itself. If you drink it, you become very powerful. That's why her people get hunted and she's the last one.
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neurotype Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:lock: As mentioned, this isn't the place to post for feedback. If you are ready for critique, try the Monthly Crit Thread, otherwise the Thumbshare Forum is also available. [link] - Lit Forum posting guidelines (includes links)
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animepornartist Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I would love to!
Send me a link to it please. =)
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Lovely-Words Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If their blood gives so much power, why are they all being killed? Wouldn't it make so much more sense to keep them all alive so they can regularly harvest the blood? It seems kind of silly and impractical to kill them all.
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DevilKid-chan Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm afraid this forum thread might get locked in a minute ^^; You should try using the critique forum, that's where people are supposed to go for feedback on their literature.
On the other hand, your story sounds quite interesting, I hope you succeed with it :)
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The-Vibeke Nov 27, 2012
Thank you. ^_^
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DevilKid-chan Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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