Hello, I need reviews on a piece that I posted. I do plan to edit it, so I appreciate suggestions. I have none so far, nor do I have any views except my own. It is based on a dream I had a while ago, and my grandmother keeps encouraging me to write. Could I please get some reviews of the rough draft??
I need reviews on a piece that I posted. I do plan to edit it, so I appreciate suggestions. I have none so far, nor do I have any views except my own. It is based on a dream I had a while ago, and my grandmother keeps encouraging me to write. Could I please get some reviews of the rough draft??
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