Gramma people......help?

~YunongLu Nov 7, 2012

I have to write a story for class. So, I was wondering is anyone, many could help me edit it? The reasoin why I say many is because it is six pages long. No way does anyone want to sit there and correct everything!I would give you sections (half a page) to correct. They also be parts you'll be able to understand and I'll fill you in what you missed about the story so you understand what scene you are correcting.

Also if this helps, I am in highschool which means my grammar won't suck too badly (hopefully)? I prefer people the ages 17 and up to correct, please!