I wrote up a story in my sleep last ngith and this morning during my sleep in and i immediately wrote it all down and i really really really really really want feedback and critique on it!
I haven't written in in actual story format just yet but some of it is in that format.
it's a very very rough sketch of what i want to write but i want to make sure that A it makes sense B it flows well (given the format issues.... it might not flow well just yet) C it is somewhat original and if it sounds too much like someone elses story.
There is no explicit content in my story aside from fighting and some gore but it's not even bad enough gore for me to put a mature warning on it....
but if you think it is mature enough then tell me please.
i really want this to work damnit! please help me!
I haven't written in in actual story format just yet but some of it is in that format.
it's a very very rough sketch of what i want to write but i want to make sure that
A it makes sense
B it flows well (given the format issues.... it might not flow well just yet)
C it is somewhat original and if it sounds too much like someone elses story.
There is no explicit content in my story aside from fighting and some gore but it's not even bad enough gore for me to put a mature warning on it....
but if you think it is mature enough then tell me please.
i really want this to work damnit! please help me!