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Monthly Literature Critique Thread: November

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Beccalicious Nov 1, 2012  Professional Writer
Posting Guidelines: Monthly Lit critique: November

Please note: This forum is refreshed as new on the first of every single month. The previous month will be locked and unstickied on the same day.

:bulletblue: This thread is for critique requests for literature deviations only. Please only post if you are interested in revising your writing and wish to receive honest critique
:bulletblue: If you would like critique, please post a comment with a direct link or thumb to your deviation.
:bulletblue: Please refrain from posting entire texts in comments.
:bulletblue: Please note, there are plenty of Groups that also offer critique as well as literature chat rooms.

:bulletorange: When giving critique, please remember to be constructive, not destructive.
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Previous Month: October

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Beccalicious Dec 1, 2012  Professional Writer
New month! [link] :lock:
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DinDeen Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wrote an original dying Earth fiction which I finished recently. I posted its prologue here on DA but I'm yet to receive any criticism. I've asked for help from my friends as I wrote it since English is not my native language. I'll post the thumbnail of the prologue which has the link to my blog:



The reason why it is linked to my blog is because the story is fragmented into "updates" (for blog writing) of 500 to 1000 words each. The story itself is on my blog but I've compiled it to a PDF. Should I submit that PDF to DA and ask for critique on it instead of just uploading the prologue?

Many thanks to anyone who'll even glimpse at this post.
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Beccalicious Dec 1, 2012  Professional Writer
we've just moved to a new month! [link]
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OnceUponANight23 Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
here: [link] I really want to improve!
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saintartaud Nov 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
Hello, I left some critique on your excerpt here: [link]
Hope it is helpful! :D
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OnceUponANight23 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, I'm gonna check that right away!
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stoppingeternity Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer

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saintartaud Nov 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
Hello, I left some critique on this piece here: [link]

Hope you find it helpful! :D
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