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September 20, 2012
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my ongoing fictional journal : genre >horror

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~g4r44 Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
entry 1 : rude awakening
rude awakeningjournal of kirukashi hato

Wednesday :sept 18th 2012: 07:12 am

i was ruthlessly awoken from a deep slumber by a thunders roaring sound that , in my sleepy daze made me thing the whole ocean decedent on my humble dwelling
as i stumbled out of my bed soaking wet i slowly realized it was but the storm that was pounding the roof of my attic bed room.
i sat on the floor for a minute or so still in a daze getting my bearings to stand up and close my window .

Wednesday :sept 18th 2012: 10:45 am

as i finished mopping up the last of the water from the floor and hang all my sheets and clothes to dry,i caught my self thinking '' this is a good star

entry 2: a day of horrors
a day of horrors day 1Wednesday September 19  06:30 pm

i have killed a man today no more  than an hour ago the man seemed to be one of those things overcome with a inconceivable rage and a blood lust only Lucifer him self could match

and after what i have experienced today I have decided to keep writing my journal in the hope that if and when this all passes and human kind is back on its feet i will have a written first hand account of what came to pass this day.
And if u were to die my only hope is that my journal is found.

after my last entry i proceeded up to my room and packed my back pack with the bear essentials to survive when i reached my attic room it

entry 3 the morning
the morningjournal of kirukashi hato

Thursday September 20 2012 3:30 am

was awoken by noises coming from the restaurant.
it sounded not like the creature i faced outside.
ass i listened to the sounds coming from underneath the steel door, as i was laying on my home made mattress waiting for the noise to pass, i felt nagging urge to investigate the strange noises coming from the restaurant,
then right before  i decided to do so a tall dark figure approached the door, i quickly dove down back in the dark corner of the restaurant kitchen.
i could hear the footstep coming near the door the loud pounding of his heavy boots on the wooden floor shot my
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$namenotrequired Sep 20, 2012  Student Interface Designer
As stated please use the monthly critique thread :) :lock:
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=futilitarian Sep 20, 2012   Writer
...And you posted this here why, exactly?
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~g4r44 Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
because i want some feed back on my work
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=futilitarian Sep 20, 2012   Writer
Try the critique thread. Also try reading the posting guidelines.
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~g4r44 Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
done thanks so many rules here i get them mixed up
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