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Thoughts of a Witch I lie huddled in the corner of my dungeon cell. It is dark, it is cold; the air is moist and stinks. Pale light pours though a small barred window. I am alone. The straw on the floor stabs into my naked feet. The dirty sackcloth robe scratches at my bloody, abused and bruised skin. Everything hurts and throbs with numb pain. I know I will die soon.
I have confessed under the torture. I knew that it would seal my fate, but I could not stand the pain any more. I shiver and tremble as the memories of the unspeakable things they had done to me come back: Their cold hands and fingers touching my body everywhere in search for the mark. As they did

What makes you click a thumbnail and keep reading?
From my writing group to-read pile in my message center, I've noticed that one thing that makes me want to keep reading is a nicely done description of the sky, even better if it ties in to character action/thoughts. (It's kind of weird. I just noticed this. But maybe that explains why I started last year's NaNoWriMo novel with a lightning storm?)
So I'm curious to find out--what makes you click?
(Alternatively, what makes you click the little "x" and say, "I don't have time for this"?)
Thanks!