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Need someone's keen eye in male anatomy and muscles

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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
He is my OC, Andreas. I would like to have him as close as perfect.
All I care about is his anatomy and muscles and body positioning.
If anyone can give quick, constructive criticism and tell me what I can do to fix whatever area looks off, please do tell. Or if anyone has a tablet, you can do a red line over it!
Not looking for blatant criticism that won't help me whatsoever.
Sorry if some lines look lighter, I have several layers.

My OC: [link]
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Fuee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   General Artist
His left forearm is still a bit wonky. All of his muscle is contained in one little ball up by his elbow when it should be more spread out. And I don't think that little V thing between his pecs and abs should be so defined, but whatever. And I'd make his ass stick out more, since I would think a man that muscular wouldn't be have one built like a frog's.

Also his pelvis his huge for a pelvis (just an observation) and he has no ears. Or really tiny ears. Or feathers for ears. I don't even know.
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Looks good to me. OMG I'm actually getting a haircut like that this weekend :P Except my hair's not as long lol
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
You're getting a mo/faux hawk???

:iconwegotabadassplz: Watch out guys, we got a bad ass over here.
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
yes mate, and im bleaching it LOL been meaning to for ages lol
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh god, why are you going to bleach it? D;
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
cos i can
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm ~ the only thing I see that is a little funky is his left pec, which might be a little too curvy? :0
Mana in the last pic you did also had one curvy side. =3= <3
Waist, abs, and arms look delicious and fine. XD
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Yush I fixed it Mizuuuuu~ >w<
And I also noticed that too in Mana. Will fix that later. D=

Thank yous. :hug:
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*huggle huggle* :la: <3 <3 <3

I needs to get Mizu arts from ManaMana again one of these days ~ >X3 <3
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fuuuu ~ just saw your edit and he looks smexier than before. XDDD <3
That little angle change for his left pec looks great ~ :la: <3
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Ok guys! :iconderpplz:

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Here's Andreas with all the edits. Is there anything else I should look at it? =O
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Kato-Regama Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yah. That's got it. Lol, if you use tabbed browsing to switch between the two pics, it looks like he's jiggling his pecs. XD Looks awesome! :heart:
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Looks weird. :iconreactionplz:
If I had a flash program I would totally make him flex his pecs. XD
Thanks for the help Kato! Glad you like my OC. :heart:
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
I'm gonna try that right now. :iconiseewhatudidplz:
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Kato-Regama Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
His left (our right) pec is just a bit too low/saggy for the angle his abs are in. It gives it a slighty puffy look. Instead of making it less puffy, maybe try inching it upwards? He's pretty hot tho. XD
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Yesh. I have posted up an updated picture. Can you see if it looks okay now? ^.^
Hehe, thank you! I like my men manly. :iconmegustaplz:
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Yeah, the pecs need more straightish lines and less circlely lines. I think the trapezius muscles could use some buffing up to match the rest of the muscles.

Also, the legs seem a bit off... it's hard without seeing the rest of him. but if you put your legs together and lean back like that, you're gonna fall over no matter how many muscles you have. It would make sense if he were leaning on a wall, so never mind if that's the case.
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Yup, I'm on it!
He is leaning on an invisible wall. :nod:
Sorry if it was hard to see that. ^^;
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Tygry Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
i-Anzu noticed the same areas I did and it's mostly an angle issue.

The area around the elbow is perhaps too thin. The angle of the chest isn't in line with the angle of his shoulders-- any easy fix. Finally, the direction of his left hand doesn't really match the casual pose or the weight I would expect from what he's holding-- a little turn of the wrist and it's more relaxed.

Let me know once you've saved this (if you even find it helpful) and I'll take it down:

Sexy character-- nice work!
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
I saved it! Now that you've mentioned it, I can see the angle issue.
I'll be fixing him up right and post an update in a few!
Thank you Tygry!
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i-Anzu Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
first off it looks really good!I love your style!Hes a hottie! the only thing i can see that might need a change is some filling out, i pink lined some parts that looked strange to me, here you go! <3
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you Zuzu! Haha, I am aiming for hotness in this one. :P
He's suppose to be a strong, dreamy hunk!

:iconmygodplz:....thank you for the pink lines! I'm still touching him up so I will do some correction around the areas you lined for me! :hug:
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Bergholtz Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
What do you mean with blatant qriticism? You mean like "this sucks, learn to draw" kind of thing? In any case I can't help you because Quick time never works on my computer. But if you are struggling with a figure my usual suggestion is to find some good referense and do anatomy studies. If the pose is simple enough, look at yourself in the mirror.
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Something along those lines, yes.
That's alright. Yep, that's what I'll have to do.
I was thinking of that, looking at myself in the mirror. Think he looks ok enough for now with some touches.

Thanks Berg. =)
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Maeyin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
I don't know a whole lot but from what i can see the chest needs to be fixed, the elbow area on the right arm, and the wrist on the left arm looks off to me. ^.^''
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
I will definitely fix those areas up right now. Thanks a lot Maeyin! :hug:
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Maeyin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
You're very welcome >3<
I'm glad I could help.
I don't know if that's all or not since i'm better with female anatomy XD
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
There could be things in need of correction but I think overall he looks fine.

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Maeyin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Well yea of course lol he looks hot
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
:iconmahfeelzplz: Ohhh thank you~~~
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Maeyin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Lol you're very welcome
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LadyKuki Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
It's pretty good for the most part. I'd just fix the chest area since it looks a little too much like the chest of a woman's. :)

Oh, and a stronger jaw could work too, but that's optional.
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Hmmm. I wanted his chest to look "puffed" up if that makes sense. I'll shrink it down a bit. =)

And the jaw I will edit too, I think that's a good idea.
Thank you very much Lady! I appreciate it. ^^
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LadyKuki Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Hehehe! You're welcome!

And you can call me Kuki, lol. I put on the "Lady" just to make the title seem more full...

Anywhoo... I have a hard time drawing males myself so. :XD:
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
Okay Kuki! It's a nice username btw.

Ahah. For me, I just need a bit of practice in anatomy altogether and perspective also. We'll get there!
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LadyKuki Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Thanks. :XD: I got it from some cartoon I liked a couple years ago, haha.

Ditto, lol.
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