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Need someone's keen eye in male anatomy and muscles

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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013   Digital Artist
He is my OC, Andreas. I would like to have him as close as perfect.
All I care about is his anatomy and muscles and body positioning.
If anyone can give quick, constructive criticism and tell me what I can do to fix whatever area looks off, please do tell. Or if anyone has a tablet, you can do a red line over it!
Not looking for blatant criticism that won't help me whatsoever.
Sorry if some lines look lighter, I have several layers.

My OC: [link]
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Fuee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   General Artist
His left forearm is still a bit wonky. All of his muscle is contained in one little ball up by his elbow when it should be more spread out. And I don't think that little V thing between his pecs and abs should be so defined, but whatever. And I'd make his ass stick out more, since I would think a man that muscular wouldn't be have one built like a frog's.

Also his pelvis his huge for a pelvis (just an observation) and he has no ears. Or really tiny ears. Or feathers for ears. I don't even know.
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Looks good to me. OMG I'm actually getting a haircut like that this weekend :P Except my hair's not as long lol
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
You're getting a mo/faux hawk???

:iconwegotabadassplz: Watch out guys, we got a bad ass over here.
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
yes mate, and im bleaching it LOL been meaning to for ages lol
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh god, why are you going to bleach it? D;
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NeroLink Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
cos i can
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm ~ the only thing I see that is a little funky is his left pec, which might be a little too curvy? :0
Mana in the last pic you did also had one curvy side. =3= <3
Waist, abs, and arms look delicious and fine. XD
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AmalaAzula Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013   Digital Artist
Yush I fixed it Mizuuuuu~ >w<
And I also noticed that too in Mana. Will fix that later. D=

Thank yous. :hug:
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*huggle huggle* :la: <3 <3 <3

I needs to get Mizu arts from ManaMana again one of these days ~ >X3 <3
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MitsukuniHanizuka Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fuuuu ~ just saw your edit and he looks smexier than before. XDDD <3
That little angle change for his left pec looks great ~ :la: <3
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