His left forearm is still a bit wonky. All of his muscle is contained in one little ball up by his elbow when it should be more spread out. And I don't think that little V thing between his pecs and abs should be so defined, but whatever. And I'd make his ass stick out more, since I would think a man that muscular wouldn't be have one built like a frog's.
Also his pelvis his huge for a pelvis (just an observation) and he has no ears. Or really tiny ears. Or feathers for ears. I don't even know.
Hmmm ~ the only thing I see that is a little funky is his left pec, which might be a little too curvy? :0 Mana in the last pic you did also had one curvy side. =3= <3 Waist, abs, and arms look delicious and fine. XD
His left (our right) pec is just a bit too low/saggy for the angle his abs are in. It gives it a slighty puffy look. Instead of making it less puffy, maybe try inching it upwards? He's pretty hot tho. XD
Yeah, the pecs need more straightish lines and less circlely lines. I think the trapezius muscles could use some buffing up to match the rest of the muscles.
Also, the legs seem a bit off... it's hard without seeing the rest of him. but if you put your legs together and lean back like that, you're gonna fall over no matter how many muscles you have. It would make sense if he were leaning on a wall, so never mind if that's the case.
i-Anzu noticed the same areas I did and it's mostly an angle issue.
The area around the elbow is perhaps too thin. The angle of the chest isn't in line with the angle of his shoulders-- any easy fix. Finally, the direction of his left hand doesn't really match the casual pose or the weight I would expect from what he's holding-- a little turn of the wrist and it's more relaxed.
Let me know once you've saved this (if you even find it helpful) and I'll take it down:
first off it looks really good!I love your style!Hes a hottie! the only thing i can see that might need a change is some filling out, i pink lined some parts that looked strange to me, here you go! <3 [link]
What do you mean with blatant qriticism? You mean like "this sucks, learn to draw" kind of thing? In any case I can't help you because Quick time never works on my computer. But if you are struggling with a figure my usual suggestion is to find some good referense and do anatomy studies. If the pose is simple enough, look at yourself in the mirror.